Any feedback in appreciated. I'm not great at structuring for rappers but I do like to f*** around.

soundcloud.com/wadewadewade/kratos

So the intro is too long. I like the rhythm but theirs too much s***. Got to space it out more and take some s*** off. It sounds like my elevator snapped off the wire and I’m on an edible so I’m going out happy. Nice rhythm but strip it down please.

Sound like something the LOX would rock