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  • Jan 31, 2023

    amazing

  • Jan 31, 2023
    OnyxShine9

    @Skiofficial YO THANK YOU!

    SUNDAY update. I had an awful day yesterday that really stunted my creative day to day flow, so I didn’t get to work on anything. But I did put this together in a few hours when I got off work earlier today. The last time I worked on it was the pic from above, so I made new line art and gave it some lighting which is still an obvious WIP.

    Full version here https://twitter.com/gatlashine/status/1619964741002350592?s=46&t=BeKWQ5PvD2LssOxpoqzVcg

    This is so sick man now I'm excited that you going with 50 pages instead of 20 pages

    Just followed you on twitter

  • Feb 2, 2023
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    @Skiofficial Thank you again, and double thanks for the follow! It felt like 20 pages wouldn't be enough of a taste to get people invested in some random guys comic, but 50 is a good rounded number to flesh out the character and narrative, and get to a good starting point for chapter 2, that would otherwise take 3 chapters to get to. I've been thinking of maybe making a 50 page release schedule every 3 months, but thats TBD.

    @Ryuka @CRWNSonly Thank you both too!

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: Eli promo art, finished for now but I might go back and add some color. There is a narrative reason for the b/w coloring. Drag to new tab for full res!

    (updated version, just a small change)

    I also completed up to page 30 in my planning drafts. I might be able to start phase 2 of the inking process by Saturday.

  • Feb 2, 2023
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    @Skiofficial Thank you again, and double thanks for the follow! It felt like 20 pages wouldn't be enough of a taste to get people invested in some random guys comic, but 50 is a good rounded number to flesh out the character and narrative, and get to a good starting point for chapter 2, that would otherwise take 3 chapters to get to. I've been thinking of maybe making a 50 page release schedule every 3 months, but thats TBD.

    @Ryuka @CRWNSonly Thank you both too!

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: Eli promo art, finished for now but I might go back and add some color. There is a narrative reason for the b/w coloring. Drag to new tab for full res!

    (updated version, just a small change)

    I also completed up to page 30 in my planning drafts. I might be able to start phase 2 of the inking process by Saturday.

    this reminds me for some reason Invincible art

  • Feb 2, 2023

    OP is onto something

  • Feb 2, 2023
    OnyxShine9
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    @Skiofficial Thank you again, and double thanks for the follow! It felt like 20 pages wouldn't be enough of a taste to get people invested in some random guys comic, but 50 is a good rounded number to flesh out the character and narrative, and get to a good starting point for chapter 2, that would otherwise take 3 chapters to get to. I've been thinking of maybe making a 50 page release schedule every 3 months, but thats TBD.

    @Ryuka @CRWNSonly Thank you both too!

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: Eli promo art, finished for now but I might go back and add some color. There is a narrative reason for the b/w coloring. Drag to new tab for full res!

    (updated version, just a small change)

    I also completed up to page 30 in my planning drafts. I might be able to start phase 2 of the inking process by Saturday.

    sheeeeesh this looks sick

  • Feb 4, 2023
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    FRIDAY UPDATE: The first 50 STORY BEAT DRAFT IS COMPLETE! Except it ended up being 53, to pace everything comfortably. Exciting to start the posing phase!

  • Feb 4, 2023
    OnyxShine9
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    @Skiofficial Thank you again, and double thanks for the follow! It felt like 20 pages wouldn't be enough of a taste to get people invested in some random guys comic, but 50 is a good rounded number to flesh out the character and narrative, and get to a good starting point for chapter 2, that would otherwise take 3 chapters to get to. I've been thinking of maybe making a 50 page release schedule every 3 months, but thats TBD.

    @Ryuka @CRWNSonly Thank you both too!

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: Eli promo art, finished for now but I might go back and add some color. There is a narrative reason for the b/w coloring. Drag to new tab for full res!

    (updated version, just a small change)

    I also completed up to page 30 in my planning drafts. I might be able to start phase 2 of the inking process by Saturday.

    Good s***, that pic looks sick asf

    Keep it up bro don't stop for anyone

  • Feb 6, 2023

    SUNDAY UPDATE: man, one of these days I’m gonna forget to update on Sunday… I really need to set an alarm cause I just remembered today was my day like 2 3 hours ago
    Anyway I’ve completed up to page 30 of my panels, and with some luck I’ll complete the last 23 tomorrow and get started on my poses Tuesday. Here’s a close up of one of my rough draft pages.

  • Feb 6, 2023

    Insane talent in this thread. Wow

  • Feb 6, 2023

    50 pages is cool, but 20 would be too. I’m not super into comics but I’ve seen artists put out 1-2 pages at a time and then release it for print at the end, could be a cool way to start building your audience earlier and keep your motivation up

    This looks great man, real thorough work

  • Feb 8, 2023
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    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: I've been doing some thinking from @the_govenment s post, and I think I have a proper gameplan in mind. I've finished out blocking all 53 pages of panels, so I think I'm going to start finishing two pages of dry art a day, which will take me 26 days, and set me at 62 days, or 60 should unforseeable circumstances arise and get pushed back. From here I'll have 60 days to digitize and finalize each page, which will give me an entire day per page to make sure everything looks the way I want it to. Its going to be super f***ing hard on my 10 hour work days, but I know I can make it happen.

    I could drop two pages a day as a build up, its not a bad idea. I just like the idea of a big rollout too much.

    SO MANY POSTS! THANK YOU YOS! @Ryuka @Oblivion99 @floofymane @Extraterrestrial AND THE TOP DAWG @celinee !

  • Feb 8, 2023
    OnyxShine9

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: I've been doing some thinking from @the_govenment s post, and I think I have a proper gameplan in mind. I've finished out blocking all 53 pages of panels, so I think I'm going to start finishing two pages of dry art a day, which will take me 26 days, and set me at 62 days, or 60 should unforseeable circumstances arise and get pushed back. From here I'll have 60 days to digitize and finalize each page, which will give me an entire day per page to make sure everything looks the way I want it to. Its going to be super f***ing hard on my 10 hour work days, but I know I can make it happen.

    I could drop two pages a day as a build up, its not a bad idea. I just like the idea of a big rollout too much.

    SO MANY POSTS! THANK YOU YOS! @Ryuka @Oblivion99 @floofymane @Extraterrestrial AND THE TOP DAWG @celinee !

    yeesh that sounds like a ton of work

    I'll be sending you my energy fam

  • Feb 9, 2023

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE PART 2: Yeah, nah, I'm in big trouble. This took me all day to finish between a 2 hour break and another 2 hours of running errands. I had to redo the second page from scratch because the original was in reverse order, and the big panel looks better on the bottom.
    And maaaan I had to HUSTLE to make the city background, y'all have no idea how hard that was since I f***ing loathe drawing backgrounds I'm fairly happy how they turned out, but there's no possible way I'm gonna be able to complete 2 full pages every day after a 10 hour shift of work yo. I'm gonna have to figure something else out or get used to pulling all nighters.

    @celinee thank you fam I'm gonna need it


  • Feb 11, 2023
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    FRIDAY UPDATE: Okay, so here's the new gameplan: 2 pages a day is very doable on my days off, but not feasible after a work day - but the due date remains of ~50 pages on May 7th. So I've decided: I'm going to 'star' the panels of importance that need the attention, and all the others will be second priority.

    In all the pages I've completed so far, I obviously much prefer the ones that were drawn to completion, but I rather dislike the "mid" panels that I feel like I spend too much time on and still don't come out very well. I'm going to need to develop a faster chicken scratch style that I can use on my second priority panels that also look decent enough.



  • Feb 13, 2023
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    SUNDAY UPDATE: Maaan I cut this one too close. Barely made this post within time. Here's a couple more pages.


  • Feb 14, 2023

    sickkkkk

  • Feb 16, 2023

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: just a couple pages


  • Feb 20, 2023

    SUNDAY UPDATE: I missed Fridays update due to some very stressful living rearrangements, so I want to apologize for that. I thought about updating on Saturday, but I wanted to keep it exclusive to the designated days instead.

    Here’s a couple pages. I’m 22/52 rough draft pages complete.


  • Feb 23, 2023
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    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: This is as far as I could get with on digitizing one page in one day. I am in serious f***ing trouble. High key wish I never started this time limit thing, but I’m too far in to back out now. Not gonna look good if I don’t deliver. Dayum.

  • Feb 23, 2023
    OnyxShine9

    WEDNESDAY UPDATE: This is as far as I could get with on digitizing one page in one day. I am in serious f***ing trouble. High key wish I never started this time limit thing, but I’m too far in to back out now. Not gonna look good if I don’t deliver. Dayum.

    dawgg it looks so clean

  • Feb 23, 2023
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    also take extra time if you need, having a hard date is nice but u don't want the time limit to impact the quality yknow

  • Feb 25, 2023

    FRIDAY UPDATE: Here's a major update to the page I posted yesterday. Way better, but still far from complete.

  • Feb 25, 2023
    celinee

    also take extra time if you need, having a hard date is nice but u don't want the time limit to impact the quality yknow

    Thank you for this. I'm kind of in a dilemma for whether I want to delay the date to complete the 50 pages to satisfaction, or stay firm on the date and limit it to 50 pages... but I'm kind of leaning towards the former. Gonna feel really lousy about doing either one though...

  • Feb 27, 2023

    Its looking f***ing dope, bro. I say just keep the date for now, ane see how close you can come to completion by the date you set for yourself. Be proud of your accomplishments no matter the end result.

    Then if you feel like you need extra time to bring your full vision to fruition, give yourself that time. Ultimately, you don't have a huge base to please yet. No one's gonna judge you for pushing it back in order to make it better. This is more a story of personal achievement. Those of us following this are more interested in seeing this comic come to life as you envision it, as opposed to seeing it on that exact date.