Thanks for listening y’all, means a lot
thank you for doing it ❤
just heard it
its a really cute and good project. it felt like a short journey with ups and downs. at the end there was a happy ending but with a twist (that beat switch reminds me on infrared) and i want to continue the journey because of that
i kinda like the dreamy setting, really enjoyed it and the artwork fits perfectly for that what you was going for
keep it up bro i want to hear more projects from you in the future!
just heard it
its a really cute and good project. it felt like a short journey with ups and downs. at the end there was a happy ending but with a twist (that beat switch reminds me on infrared) and i want to continue the journey because of that
i kinda like the dreamy setting, really enjoyed it and the artwork fits perfectly for that what you was going for
keep it up bro i want to hear more projects from you in the future!
Thanks for listening & I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I love the artwork a lot.
It’s my birthday today 🥶
Would love it if y’all listened to my project and gave me some feedback!
Thanks
Ashes is dope as f***
Some sounds could have better mixes tho but the style is unique and it’s nice to listen to
Some sounds could have better mixes tho but the style is unique and it’s nice to listen to
Thanks for listening! Yeah I noticed some s*** wasn’t mixed that well, especially Infinity. I’m growing though.
Glad you like it, and appreciate you calling it unique
Sounds like real music. Good job. Better than that album DJ Shadow dropped this year. Would be nice if you had some (more?) vocals here and there though. Sampled or original.
Solid opener. That "bonk" kick is fun and how it interplays with the metallic synth is nice. That twink twinkle little star breakdown kisses fingers. Love that synth stab throughout Ashes, that climb in the middle, and the breakdown to close it out. Love the back and forth throughout on Villa, kind of a simpler layout so the subtle layering and cycling gets to shine. That seamless transition to March is lovely. Not my favorite track though. Not a big fan of the sounds besides the flutey synth. Grace is a trip. Atmosphere rich as hell. Infinity kind of like another March for me. So rigid compared to the track before. Maybe that juxtaposition works for some. Last leg of it is nice with the haunting choir vibe. Piano on Winter is not doing it for me. Those whistling synths are neat. That crescendo in the middle followed by the plummet is really cool. Drum pattern on Chrome a bit stock. Kind of sounds like a Flume song with those hi-hats and that pitch shift. Love Flume though so good. You really know how to structure a song. Taking it on a detour and leading it back into the core theme. Great. Not sure about just fading that one out when no previous track did that. The End got that Ice Cream Truck jingle. Another March or Winter until the back half when you wash everything out.
Favorite Songs: Villa, Grace
Throughout there were times when some instruments got quiet and it just sounded like I needed to turn my s*** up. Some instruments just didn't do it for me. Like the actual songwriting was great, but just the sounds performing the tune weren't up to snuff. I'm just some dumbass so feel free to ignore any of this. Just felt like actually giving feedback to a quality OC submission.
Sounds like real music. Good job. Better than that album DJ Shadow dropped this year. Would be nice if you had some (more?) vocals here and there though. Sampled or original.
Solid opener. That "bonk" kick is fun and how it interplays with the metallic synth is nice. That twink twinkle little star breakdown kisses fingers. Love that synth stab throughout Ashes, that climb in the middle, and the breakdown to close it out. Love the back and forth throughout on Villa, kind of a simpler layout so the subtle layering and cycling gets to shine. That seamless transition to March is lovely. Not my favorite track though. Not a big fan of the sounds besides the flutey synth. Grace is a trip. Atmosphere rich as hell. Infinity kind of like another March for me. So rigid compared to the track before. Maybe that juxtaposition works for some. Last leg of it is nice with the haunting choir vibe. Piano on Winter is not doing it for me. Those whistling synths are neat. That crescendo in the middle followed by the plummet is really cool. Drum pattern on Chrome a bit stock. Kind of sounds like a Flume song with those hi-hats and that pitch shift. Love Flume though so good. You really know how to structure a song. Taking it on a detour and leading it back into the core theme. Great. Not sure about just fading that one out when no previous track did that. The End got that Ice Cream Truck jingle. Another March or Winter until the back half when you wash everything out.
Favorite Songs: Villa, Grace
Throughout there were times when some instruments got quiet and it just sounded like I needed to turn my s*** up. Some instruments just didn't do it for me. Like the actual songwriting was great, but just the sounds performing the tune weren't up to snuff. I'm just some dumbass so feel free to ignore any of this. Just felt like actually giving feedback to a quality OC submission.
Wow this is the type of feedback I was really looking for. Thank you so much. I’m really glad you liked it overall and I’m definitely trying to improve in anyway I can. So I’ll be taking all of this feedback and growing.
I agree with some of the mixing, I overlimited some of it & f***ed it up, especially Infinity.
Chrome was the oldest song on here but I liked it for what it was. I can see the stock drum type sound you’re talking about.
Just thank you thank you
Can’t wait to work on the next album, gonna make y’all proud
cant wait
I liked it, cool vibes all through out. Use more diverse sounds tho some of the sounds sounded kinda stock
I liked it, cool vibes all through out. Use more diverse sounds tho some of the sounds sounded kinda stock
I agree with that, I’ll be expanding my sounds for my next project. A lot of these were indeed stock.