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vocals improved alot too, but so did the mixing
love the layering too with your vocals, lyrics obv there but ur a poet id say tho for bigger audiences dont go too poetic, so they know what its about

id say sound selection and drums in terms of prod,work on that cause vocally and vision wise alot of steps have been made and u clearly know how to set up an atmosphere, just the prod gets in the way imo, keep it up famalam loved to hear this tbh

thanks for listening bro! Yeah, somehow my vocals improved - don't know how. I've decided to produce my own songs from now on, so slowly improving

aye man time does that, if u keep singing its like a muscle specially dope to hear the layerings
yeah man keep building and going eventually youll get it all down why solo tho?

mail sent btw

just want to do everything myself because it's more rewarding for me

aye i unsderstand tbh
to me satisfaction really remains the same whether i helped from 0 or got the beat already
just happy to get it out

I don’t understand how u think my synths sounded unpleasant lol

The whole vision is cool in ur song. I really like it but idk it sounds like there’s something distortion going on

Feelin these tunes because they have something different about them. Once I got past Carty On it was a vibe. The Artwork is really unique too. Keep it up tho. Def some potential to revive that post 808s sound. PS. Turn that bass up on tracks like Exit too

I f*** with this bruh

The effects on the vocals are dope and the beats really dope. I do think the beat could be simplified a little bit, but it’s dope and unique for sure. Also I’d probably suggest simplifying your delivery on the vocals, kind of hard to explain what I mean though lol. I guess, establish a basic melody early on and then as the song carries on add deviations from that melody, rather than having deviations throughout the song from start to finish if that makes sense? You’ve got a good voice though and it works well with your production. Keep it up bruh

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yoooo this s*** dope as f***. sounds so dark and macabre in a way. for some reason it gives me tim burton vibes. love the vocals, youve improved. your melodies as well.

good work man you getting better.

yea this is a vibe, fits perfectly into this indie vibe ive been in lately. keep it up

This is really dope