figured id drop it her for y'all to checkout!

my Insta is @sumwiteguy

soundcloud.com/space-toilet

move to cs

I listened to "Rokstar" and your delivery isn't bad, but your lyrics are lacking. You should rap a bit louder, though, with more conviction. Work on your cadence, as it's all over the place. The mixing isn't good; everything sounds bombastic, and not in a pleasing way. I see potential in you, though - keep working.

giving advice like we can't just click the links in your bio and realise your challenged.

How is this guy not banned yet @Hollewood?

Fragile, talk a lot of s*** on other peoples stuff, the second someone talks back you need mummy. Too scared to even reply me, spooky.

I peeped his stuff & I kinda like his track called This is Fine it's better than your stuff tbh

to OP I think you just need to ride with the beat a lil better (on your Rokstar track) & it'll be dope. this s*** is not bad at all though

lol I'm looking at your Soundcloud and can't even be bothered to listen a song

Sorry, confused you with someone else @yesac

HELP POLICE I'M BEING ATTACKED ON THE INTERNET, SOMEONE'S SAYING MEAN THINGS AFTER I SAID MEAN THINGS, MISTER OFFICER HELP!!!!!!