about 1 minute of lyrics, pls give feedback, constructive criticism, the things you like and the things you hate. Just trying to improve
work on your delivery !!! it sounds like your reading a book in school at some points. also on the final mix subtle auto tune on the vocals would be perfect. There's something there keep working
i like this op. i agree with chloe that the track would benefit from some subtle autotune. i listened to another track of yours (Everybody Switching) and i think a slower tempo complements your voice. but honestly that's just personal preference
This is solid keep doing your thing. Like Chloe said, just work on that delivery a little and it’s wraps.
i like this op. i agree with chloe that the track would benefit from some subtle autotune. i listened to another track of yours (Everybody Switching) and i think a slower tempo complements your voice. but honestly that's just personal preference
preciate it bro
work on your delivery !!! it sounds like your reading a book in school at some points. also on the final mix subtle auto tune on the vocals would be perfect. There's something there keep working
Thanks, I think I just need to be better at hearing myself, I'm way too impatient with my takes and need to be willing to re do them if it doesn't sound right. Do you sit or stand while recording and do you think that makes a difference in delivery? I usually sit down
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Yikes, Imagine being this negative and miserable.
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OP with another one ☝️The pre-chorus has a Yellow Tape Boys shawny binladen feel, I liked that - when it gets into the actual verses I echo Chloe’s feedback, but when you lean into the flow its very good
Add a copious amount of ad libs, trim the whole thing down to like 1:03, the plays will flow like untapped spring water
and to differ a bit from the pack I actually liked the tempo but don’t let that hang you up too much really its the flow and charisma that matters in the end
OP your vocal tone kinda reminds me off these guys too not a bad source of inspo if I do say so myself
flow hard but delivery and cadence needs work
Seems like the consensus is that I delivered the hook well but the verse fell flat. Noted, I’ll try to let loose a little more on the next one
Fire bro. Work on the delivery a bit but I’ll be checking out whatever else you put out for sure
Proud of this mfer
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Fire bro. Work on the delivery a bit but I’ll be checking out whatever else you put out for sure
Stop lying man lol