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  • about 1 minute of lyrics, pls give feedback, constructive criticism, the things you like and the things you hate. Just trying to improve

  • work on your delivery !!! it sounds like your reading a book in school at some points. also on the final mix subtle auto tune on the vocals would be perfect. There's something there keep working

  • i like this op. i agree with chloe that the track would benefit from some subtle autotune. i listened to another track of yours (Everybody Switching) and i think a slower tempo complements your voice. but honestly that's just personal preference

  • This is solid keep doing your thing. Like Chloe said, just work on that delivery a little and it’s wraps.

  • free american

    i like this op. i agree with chloe that the track would benefit from some subtle autotune. i listened to another track of yours (Everybody Switching) and i think a slower tempo complements your voice. but honestly that's just personal preference

    preciate it bro

  • chloehotline

    work on your delivery !!! it sounds like your reading a book in school at some points. also on the final mix subtle auto tune on the vocals would be perfect. There's something there keep working

    Thanks, I think I just need to be better at hearing myself, I'm way too impatient with my takes and need to be willing to re do them if it doesn't sound right. Do you sit or stand while recording and do you think that makes a difference in delivery? I usually sit down

  • Absolute trash find a new hobby loser

  • Big YDB

    Absolute trash find a new hobby loser

    Look at this loser

  • Big YDB

    Absolute trash find a new hobby loser

    Yikes, Imagine being this negative and miserable.

  • DevilOrAngel

    Look at this loser

    seek help

  • DevilOrAngel

    Look at this loser

    Look at indeed listings brokey

  • Gimick

    Yikes, Imagine being this negative and miserable.

    Imagine being UNEMPLOYED

  • Big YDB

    Imagine being UNEMPLOYED

    What do u do for work?

  • OP with another one ☝️The pre-chorus has a Yellow Tape Boys shawny binladen feel, I liked that - when it gets into the actual verses I echo Chloe’s feedback, but when you lean into the flow its very good

    Add a copious amount of ad libs, trim the whole thing down to like 1:03, the plays will flow like untapped spring water

    and to differ a bit from the pack I actually liked the tempo but don’t let that hang you up too much really its the flow and charisma that matters in the end

  • Big YDB

    Look at indeed listings brokey

  • gh0stman

    What do u do for work?

    Ceo of ya girls coochie

  • OP your vocal tone kinda reminds me off these guys too not a bad source of inspo if I do say so myself

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    flow hard but delivery and cadence needs work

  • BLUE NOTE

    flow hard but delivery and cadence needs work

    Seems like the consensus is that I delivered the hook well but the verse fell flat. Noted, I’ll try to let loose a little more on the next one

  • Fire bro. Work on the delivery a bit but I’ll be checking out whatever else you put out for sure

  • Proud of this mfer

    If u love dark experimental trap,rock/punk, synth pop

  • LordPrettyFlackoJR

    Proud of this mfer

    !https://youtu.be/RQzRL3SErAw

    If u love dark experimental trap,rock/punk, synth pop

    Nigga this ain’t the thread for this

  • Big YDB

    Look at indeed listings brokey

    Lol huh?

  • Striker

    Fire bro. Work on the delivery a bit but I’ll be checking out whatever else you put out for sure

    Stop lying man lol

  • DrizzyTaughtMe

    Nigga this ain’t the thread for this

    Music knows no boundaries sorry bro every opportunity is one to take

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