this so artsy

its fun. the vocals the weak point here

also the mix is very hollow. you need something to fill in the space. maybe reverb on the keys. maybe a pad or something.

thanks. and i agree with what you have said. i know im not hte best singer, but i think i can get away with it especially if i use more treatment and effects. these vocals are pretty raw and i'm not strong enough to fully sell it i guess

will take your feedback into consideration for further music

no don't focus on fixing it in post

if u work on ur delivery n s***, just a couple months and u will b good. This kind of stuff you can't fix with mixing

word. that makes it sound like it aint too far off then. i was just thinking of some artists i like that use a lot auto tune and double tracking, compression, etc to get a pretty dense unnatural sound that nevertheless works for their sound. like sam gellaitry for example.

but i will definitely keep working on my delivery like u suggest