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  • Oct 30, 2019
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    on his new song self control off his new record, youngboy never broke again employs a rare rhyme scheme known as the graduated internal poetic meter imo

    When my grandma died, I had to beat the odds and it wasn't easy
    When Boozilla died, I almost lost my mind, broke me to pieces
    We was slangin' iron for Dump and all the rest, it ain't no secret
    38 across my neck, we be them boys you don't want beef with
    Smokin' dro, smell it when I hit the door, 'cause I need it
    I ain't the one, these p**** niggas know I be fiendin'
    Hop out the car with diamonds 'round my throat, b****, I'm beamin'
    I don't think no nigga can't see me, I be paranoid while I'm leanin'

    notice how the internal rhymes have there own rhythmic balance in addition to the end of the bar wich usually rhyme jsut one syllable (for common rapers)

    other notable mcs that use this scheme: joe budden, nas, jay electronica, andre 3000, eminem, jeoy bada$$

    discuss

  • Oct 30, 2019
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    I don’t really get what you’re saying

  • Oct 30, 2019

    I feel like im gucci mane in 2006 !!

  • Oct 30, 2019

    thats all well and good but has he made use of the Pushkin sonnet before

  • Oct 30, 2019

    powerful lyricism

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    FRITZD

    I don’t really get what you’re saying

    Clearly u are not well versed with hip hop mechanics.

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    Master of songwriting m
    Thanks for pointing this stuff out @Malcolm_Rhyme_King

  • Oct 30, 2019

    His melodies be as powerful as slave hymns

  • Oct 30, 2019

    youngGOAT impresses again

  • Oct 30, 2019
    Malcolm Rhyme King

    Clearly u are not well versed with hip hop mechanics.

    I’m just confused on what does balance mean

  • Oct 30, 2019

    Hey malcolm can you give me the mathematics on track 11 "Lonely Child"?

    It's my favorite new song

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    Incredible technical ability

    I got him in my top 5 of all time

    rakim
    nas
    big daddy kane
    youngboy
    nocap

  • Oct 30, 2019

    fk this nigga talkin about lmaooo

  • Smoking dro......CAUSE I NEEEEED IT

  • Oct 30, 2019

    "niggas know we quick to blow for any reason!"

    NBA youngboy suffers from premature ejaculation

  • Ok

    Incredible technical ability

    I got him in my top 5 of all time

    rakim
    nas
    big daddy kane
    youngboy
    nocap

  • Sep 10, 2022

    great song