i fw it @op make it a min longer and its done

real

Yea this is dope

thank u sir

i like the vocal a lot instro is whatever

word thanks. didnt really finish it at all, i dont like the intro either lol

u trying to do a jai paul thing w the voice? thats what i picked up not sure if intentional

he's one of my favorite artists so probably. hah. in what way do you think the vocal sounds jai paul esque? just lofi and s***ty recording? haha

yeah kinda that & the coy-ish soft falsetto

dope. appreciate you taking the time bruh

this is dope

ayyyy thanks

F*** yeah this go

DOPE, wanted to hear at least one more element under the chorus tho something striking and full

this goes dumb. i love that beat and the composition. only thing that’s a lil whacky is the vocal mixing but yea this a tune

hmm yeah i feel you. maybe coulda played with introducing a new instrument playing the same chords to add more impact. it's still in demo version at this point. might go back and "finish" it

specifically what do you think would improve the vocal mix?

yeah definitely same chords bro just really make that contrast between chorus and verse its important stuff

forreal. check out another demo of mine if you want. ktt2.com/demo-waht-u-think-32501450

id be curious to know what you think

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Yuuup