I am not a fan of the production, something about it just sounds unpleasant - but not in an interesting way; just sounds like poor sound selection - that could be due to the overall mixing because even your vocals go in and out of the mix. You need to fix your flow, and your lyrics are as generic as it gets. Your delivery also sounds like every rapper that "doesn't mumble". Wasn't feeling this, at all.
That’s fair, i don’t expect every person to give positive reviews.
This song would not reflect what i have been working on recently anyway