Creasy

2y

f*** with me pls

https://songwhip.com/aceelrahim/deaftune

Mmm Hmm

2y

has hella potential.

You need a hardcore raspy voice type of rapper on this type of production though.

Your voice/ effects would be fine as like a hook but not the whole thing.

"Really in the gutter this a real perspective
Loopy headed motherfucker really perplexing
Drift in and out of what's real and what's fake
Broken homes I been in so Ima build a place
Day in and day out I'm stuck with my vices
Stuck with my faults and my choices in this life here
Picking the wrong options I'm never that decisive
I can't take it all in at once need it in slices"

That should be the hook. Done 2-3 times
With 3 Hard Verses throughout the song

Something like this.
https://vocaroo.com/1iAFYbnwAP6I

Hook pitched up by 1 sounds best to me @op

Creasy

2y

damn

but i hear u bro bro really appreciate you listening!!!!

Mmm Hmm

2y

To answer the Title Question

It wasnt b***oo

It was good

i wouldnt even bother giving feedback if it was mid lol