Just looking for some feedback. Workingon a new project will randomly update thread with demos for opinions.

Edit:

Was f***ing around and made this. Not for the project but it’s cool vibes

PRAY4ME FREESTYLE - wi.to/3e82fda7cf5ddcd4

How’d ya come up w/the name Fenix?

Was given to me by a former KanyeTalk forum user who ended up signing to Fools Gold. Grande Marshall.

I’m from Phoenix so he just said to spell it like that and I’ve ran with it ever since.

thats a cool track

u can definitely rap but some bars feel a lil generic/lacking personality

honestly pretty good tho ur competent

Out of curiosity, where did it feel generic?

Also thank you 🙏🏻 I appreciate you listening

this is tuff bro I really like it. good job, I wanna hear more

More coming soon bro 💯 I been working on this new album for awhile

For me I think it was the second half of the track cuz I feel like the first verse you kinda let ur anxieties about faith, death, and ur own morality be known so the second verse, although written well is just uninteresting to me due to it just expanding a little more on the first part than bringing new s*** to the table

This is just my take tho n even then I can see that ur good at rapping in terms of imagery and wordplay n all that n i f*** with the track, u definitely have the talent to put some fire s*** out

Side note: isn't there a fenix in shoreline mafia?

Idk, I’ve never heard of shoreline Mafia.

I appreciate the feedback though. I get what you’re saying about the 2nd verse. It could definitely use some work. Its nice to get some honest and detailed feedback that I can actually use to help work on the track.

Updated with new demo. All feedback welcome. Keep in mind these are not mixed just rough cuts.

Put a new demo up

I f*** with this one too bro

Update with some new s***