Sounds good, mixed and mastered well too, need better delivery on ur rapping tho

yea. great mix. the rapping is the standout to me. most unique and enjoyable part of the track. it's chill but bouncy delivery makes the singing vocals come off as overwrought and incessant. still good tho.

I'm the singer, not the rapper! But thanks for the nice feedback dude!

Thanks for the feedback. I'm the vocalist, what could you say I would need to improve on next time then? It's funny how your comment is the complete polar opposite of the other in this thread. If you need feedback on anything give me a shout dude

The other feedback is valid. Quavo sounds out of place on that Justin beiber song. It was an obvious crossover attempt and didn’t meld fully, but it’s a hit.

I would say switch up the delivery and vary the notes on your singing. Like Future’s verse on Never Satisfied.

He’s chill and in the middle of the verse erupts. Use variance to create a more engaging narrative.

If you’re going to use one tone, look at toosie slide. It’s better to be boring than overwhelming sometimes. U don’t want to ask too much of the listener.

Thanks dude appreciate the constructive criticism. I know my vocals were ‘full’ on for the entire track so I could try to flow between that and a softer vocal to keep the listener more engaged and not overwhelmed with large vocals. Thanks again.

Oh then ur s*** nice then keep it up

Thanks dude, this is my first ever track! Working on a mixtape which should be released at some point this year. Glad you like it