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  • Nov 9, 2021
    duck fr

    @drdre_ help bro need feedback

    !https://youtu.be/1sMSQtvpJvU

    Good flow
    Got the voice for it too
    Keep it up

  • Nov 9, 2021

    U ruined any chance at a Lil Nas X feature btw... Hope u know that

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    duck fr

    @drdre_ help bro need feedback

    !https://youtu.be/1sMSQtvpJvU

    Gonna have to check out your album, this is fire

  • Nov 9, 2021
    SBMike

    Had to listen to the Boosie track after the discourse itt, and yea your flow is not it.

    Like you can clearly see the difference in skill level from how Boosie was able to get on the beat (and I hate that nigga too and he garbage too) compared to you. It’s like you trying to make a circle fit into a square peg.

    The difference is even more apparent on the track woth Gotit

  • Nov 9, 2021

    Why you slander Lids like that somebody gotta sell the hats

  • Nov 9, 2021
    Steak
    !https://youtu.be/HeiIitsWcRA

    This is textbook “look up their uncle”

    All that budget can’t buy a good song

  • F for op

  • Nov 9, 2021

    Truly beautiful thread

  • Nov 9, 2021
    Creasy

    this is drakes fault

    !https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLmlU6RaPKA

    Part 3?

  • Nov 9, 2021

    OP your voice just does not fit the type of beats you be rapping over and your flow doesn’t sound good/natural

  • Nov 9, 2021
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    Phlegm

    😅 lol ya never know but ya got me

    nah i’m actually not lyin, i did hitek tek by future and i got some s*** wit gunna droppin on DS4

  • @op maybe get a song with Yung Gravy , since99 or something

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    I can’t get past the way he comes in on the track s*** kills me everytime

  • Nov 9, 2021
    Shockwave

    Gonna have to check out your album, this is fire

    thank u bro

  • Nov 9, 2021
    guetfa

    nah i’m actually not lyin, i did hitek tek by future and i got some s*** wit gunna droppin on DS4

    this s*** tuff

  • what happened to the future song i was listening to it

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    I be rapping over Pro Tools, so cool
    Cool mood
    I got a new phantom she hopped in it
    I told her "Play by the rules.
    Do you ever worry bout the night time streets?
    Or dark room creeping Monsters, Inc.?"

  • duck fr

    @drdre_ help bro need feedback

    !https://youtu.be/1sMSQtvpJvU
  • Nov 9, 2021
    duck fr

    @drdre_ help bro need feedback

    !https://youtu.be/1sMSQtvpJvU

  • Mmm Hmm 😆
    Nov 9, 2021

    My feedback
    Criticism

    Based off the Boosie video
    And Lil gotit

    1. Your voice is not for rapping. Idk if your forcing that voice or not. But it's definitely not for rapping. Sounds great for Podcasting tho.

    2. You look like a gimmick rapper. With no gimmick.

    3. Stop buying features.

    4. You need to work on your lyrics.

    5. You need to work on your flow.

    6. And since your "up and coming" you should
    NEVER EVER GET WASHED ON YOUR OWN SONG.
    That makes me think. "If this man is getting destroyed by Boosie and other rappers I don't even know. Then what's special about him?"

    7. Videos were bad. Y'all could've at least edited out the parts in the videos where the features you paid for looked bored or were looking at you crazy.

    8. Doesn't even sound like your rapping. Your just talking.

    9. Nothing stood out.

    10. You the creator look bored in the videos man. Cmon fam.

    Positives: I typed in Cordova and The Boosie song was the first search result. So that's good.

    Regardless of what I say. Good s*** tryna get out your dreams tho.

    Also if you have this much guap laying around to buy features and rent these houses and cars then just invest better I think you'll do extremely well as a podcaster.

  • Nov 9, 2021

    @op you are cringe

  • Nov 9, 2021
    drdre

    Sorry man if u want the honest truth you dont got it like that. U might be able to develop a lil niche fanbase of tom mcdonald fans but the crowd ur aiming for don't rock with u

    Firstly u paid no jumper to check u out (im assuming if not then nice stuff!) They dont speak down on songs they were paid to play unless its OD TRASH. Ur not Trash ur just not it.

    U cant buy ur way into this crowd. Paying for gotit and boosie feats damn how.muxh they cost? I know daBaby got a boosie feat years before he blew up...

    Anyway this aint hate like I know some of u are gonna say. I aint got constructive criticism but that doesnt mean its hate. Edit: actually saying this crowd dont rock with u but tom mcdonald crowd might is constructive criticism

    Hate would be Yo UR TRASH WTFFF

    Im saying go read the comments on the boosie video. People not rocking with it besides boosie. Ur voice is an acquired taste

    "U might be able to develop a lil niche fanbase of tom mcdonald fans but the crowd ur aiming for don't rock with u"

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    Ava


    Don’t lie to the mans like that

    bring this gif back i beg

  • Nov 9, 2021
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    The Big Elote

    bring this gif back i beg

    not the avy

  • Nov 9, 2021
    throwawayokay

    boy aint no way boy

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