This cant get any worse for OP
This is arguably the greatest thread of the past 3 months
This almost funnier than the ye drink champs interview
@op Just be humble and take the actual criticisms from this thread outside of the jokes.
Your voice is cool; however, the delivery and flow of the lyrics is very choppy and awkward. It feels like every other bar is drastically delivered in a different way and it throws off the overall verse and song. At times it feels as if your vocal presence is too much also (maybe it's mixed louder or something).
And then there is your image which seems to clash with your message. On "Passion", you're rapping about staying down until coming up and finally making it (while people are hating) yet simultaneously flash as many clothing brands/products, cars, and a terribly fake Jason Voorhees chain we've all seen advertised across cheap jewelry sites/shops (among other things) as possible. The set pieces just don't provide or support the authenticity of the lyrics. It's like two different songs are playing. Your "bro" is selling this and that as if you aren't looking like an already financially stable guy trying hard to move around in a music video after shelling out thousands of dollars for some visuals.
You haven't "made it" yet.
Making it doesn't involve paying for features that steal the light away from you, let alone highlighting how terrible you are compared to whoever else is on the song.
This thread offers you a chance to actually prove you're dedicated to this road you're traveling down by putting in the work and applying yourself to being better and trying harder.
If things work out, then this moment will be a legendary point of your career and life to look back on in the future because the truth hurts at the start.
I wonder how much it costs to get a boosie feature and video
Boosie was promoting free features awhile back.
So... Maybe @op got lucky
If I were to give some legitimate criticism to OP id say your delivery sounds forced man, there’s no emotional range in your voice. It just sounds like some forex seminar guy talking to me. You gotta be confident with the way you deliver s***
@op Just be humble and take the actual criticisms from this thread outside of the jokes.
Your voice is cool; however, the delivery and flow of the lyrics is very choppy and awkward. It feels like every other bar is drastically delivered in a different way and it throws off the overall verse and song. At times it feels as if your vocal presence is too much also (maybe it's mixed louder or something).
And then there is your image which seems to clash with your message. On "Passion", you're rapping about staying down until coming up and finally making it (while people are hating) yet simultaneously flash as many clothing brands/products, cars, and a terribly fake Jason Voorhees chain we've all seen advertised across cheap jewelry sites/shops (among other things) as possible. The set pieces just don't provide or support the authenticity of the lyrics. It's like two different songs are playing. Your "bro" is selling this and that as if you aren't looking like an already financially stable guy trying hard to move around in a music video after shelling out thousands of dollars for some visuals.
You haven't "made it" yet.
Making it doesn't involve paying for features that steal the light away from you, let alone highlighting how terrible you are compared to whoever else is on the song.
This thread offers you a chance to actually prove you're dedicated to this road you're traveling down by putting in the work and applying yourself to being better and trying harder.
If things work out, then this moment will be a legendary point of your career and life to look back on in the future because the truth hurts at the start.
A CLB user being nice?
I can’t get over it ops rap voice is horrible man
He gotta do podcasts man

That's dope bro!
edit
(op really changed this thread title to further his clout chasing)
it was a good start