Jun 14, 2022Some cool lines here and there but you need to work with the syllables, some lines are too squeezed because you packed too many syllables in it, it can work here and there but when it happens too often it sounds amateurish. And sometimes you get off-beat. Your voice sounds good tho, your delivery is good too. Just need to work on the flow
Jun 14, 2022
eel eyeWho produced
It’s in the bio of song
Jun 14, 2022I wish I had the confidence op has
- Jun 14, 2022
IceTrainOP your music is more ambitious than your technical rapping skills allow you to be. I think you should make some demo tracks that emphasis less on lyrics and more on flow and energy as practice before you attempt to make the music that you want/music like in OP.
Not saying song in OP is bad, just too amatuerish for my liking.
I take this as a compliment, the part about “being too ambitious” , I think I am very ambitious, in what I’m trying to create and achieve, so I’m glad it reflects on the track, I’ll continue to try to master the process and sound... but also this song is a rough version, more to come, that’s more tamed IG
- Jun 14, 2022
YallboyzsoftI respect it OP. Keep grinding and putting the work in, and you’ll naturally get better and make believers out of everyone. Keep that confidence and don’t let them break you. I’d be interested in seeing how a whole project sounds
Appreciate it broadie, that songs part of a rough demo on yt, that you can check out if you’ve got the chance, but I got a project coming that will have a more professional quality
Jun 14, 2022·1 reply
MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it
OP
- Jun 14, 2022Altar
OP
Hmmm 🤔 would be some fire cover art
- Jul 7, 2022
Bump, VOTY coming soon
Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
Jul 7, 20225th listen
Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
Jul 7, 2022I actually really enjoyed the track OP
Def needs to be tightened up flow/lyrics wise tho
Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
Jul 7, 2022This ain't it bro but it's decent
Jul 7, 2022·1 replyWaterlooooI’d say the delusion is when you don’t believe in yourself.
Or rather if you have a dream why not chase it.. everybody who is successful has somebody - maybe even a lot of somebody’s - who think they lack talent, so why should anybody not go for it?
One mans trash another’s treasure.
Ain’t trying to crush dreams or anything. If you believe you can do it then go for it man
But don’t do that “you just don’t get it cause it ain’t made for you” s***. Take the criticism and just put in more work. You need to put more time in and become a better rapper. Telling everybody they don’t get it just makes you look like a delusional weirdo
Jul 7, 2022·1 replyWaterlooooI’d say the delusion is when you don’t believe in yourself.
Or rather if you have a dream why not chase it.. everybody who is successful has somebody - maybe even a lot of somebody’s - who think they lack talent, so why should anybody not go for it?
One mans trash another’s treasure.
you not at the level where you can post this kind of stuff my dude
Keep it up tho you clearly have a vision
Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it lmao
Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
pneu ❕Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
Jul 7, 2022MUNCH KHINGHer virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
- Jul 7, 2022
Word of advice op, dont rap about periods or anything too gross, the line about bloody virginity alone gonna turn a lot of people away unless you’re trying to do a horrorcore thing
Jul 7, 2022You gotta sound one click more dispassionate or two clicks more confident. I don't think it's bad though. Ready for the VOTY player
- Jul 8, 2022MUNCH KHING
Her virginity was pure it was awful
It was bloody; it was flooding
When I touched it 
- Jul 8, 2022leonardoDAvinci
you not at the level where you can post this kind of stuff my dude
Keep it up tho you clearly have a vision
What kinda stuff is that exactly? All it is , is me saying don’t stop believing