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    Singing is fun. Now I see why Kanye made an album with only that.

    My Soundcloud R&B song

  • Jun 4, 2020
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    Johnny 2x4
    !https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h7aYFgE7Ol0

    Singing is fun. Now I see why Kanye made an album with only that.

    My Soundcloud R&B song

    https://soundcloud.com/isaiah-dennis-174744272/drink-for-me

    This is tight i definitely prefer the youtube one to the souncloud song tho

  • Jun 4, 2020
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    soundcloud joint is hard

    going up up if this is just one month at it

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    love the soundcloud one. Gave me a slight gambino x cudi vibe

  • Jun 4, 2020
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    Johnny 2x4
    !https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h7aYFgE7Ol0

    Singing is fun. Now I see why Kanye made an album with only that.

    My Soundcloud R&B song

    https://soundcloud.com/isaiah-dennis-174744272/drink-for-me

    Towers/Venue has good vocals (sound wise), but not a fan of the mixing, particularly when some of the background vocals come during the first verse. I would simplify your verses, to make the instrumental to ride a bit more; the verses dragged, for me.

    The singing could use a bit of autotune as - to me, at least - they sound pitchy.

    Not bad - I can tell you spent some time on this song.

  • Jun 4, 2020
    MM6 Moka

    This is tight i definitely prefer the youtube one to the souncloud song tho

    Thaaaats craazy. I like the soundcloud one more because it was my first time singing. Thanks so much for the listen. Post your music if you want.

  • Jun 4, 2020
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    Cudois

    soundcloud joint is hard

    going up up if this is just one month at it

    Thanks fam. If you make music post in here.

  • Jun 4, 2020
    Triplesss

    love the soundcloud one. Gave me a slight gambino x cudi vibe

    my brother said the same thing. Thanks dude. Post your music here if you have some.

  • Jun 4, 2020
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    Towers/Venue has good vocals (sound wise), but not a fan of the mixing, particularly when some of the background vocals come during the first verse. I would simplify your verses, to make the instrumental to ride a bit more; the verses dragged, for me.

    The singing could use a bit of autotune as - to me, at least - they sound pitchy.

    Not bad - I can tell you spent some time on this song.

    Dude thank you sooo much for the extensive feedback.
    I definitely see the weakness in carrying the correct pitch.
    Auto-tune feels like an easier route but then I feel like I'll get better at autotune and not better at singing.

    I heard your music and i thought it was really dope.
    Carry On & SA#5 sound really eclectic. I haven't got a chance to hear the new project but I def will.

    You would think so right?
    I made this song in like a week while i'm working on a mixtape and this was a leftover but i still wanted to release it ya know?

    Here's some of my SC rap s***

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    Johnny 2x4

    Dude thank you sooo much for the extensive feedback.
    I definitely see the weakness in carrying the correct pitch.
    Auto-tune feels like an easier route but then I feel like I'll get better at autotune and not better at singing.

    I heard your music and i thought it was really dope.
    Carry On & SA#5 sound really eclectic. I haven't got a chance to hear the new project but I def will.

    You would think so right?
    I made this song in like a week while i'm working on a mixtape and this was a leftover but i still wanted to release it ya know?

    Here's some of my SC rap s***

    https://soundcloud.com/isaiah-dennis-174744272/ghost

    You kind of rap like MC Rap (when he raps in his normal voice) but with better flow. I would add a bit of reverb in your vocals, just to make your vocals more atmospheric. I would also push your vocals further up in the mix. Ghost is better than the youtube one. My main criticism would be work on your lyricism, because you tend to sway too easily into cliches.

  • Jun 5, 2020
    Johnny 2x4

    Thanks fam. If you make music post in here.

    i don't make music but i do photography/design hmu whenver you need artwork followed u on SC @regGQ