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  • Jun 27, 2020
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    sounds all over the place and generic

  • Jun 29, 2020
    New NIGHTMAN

    i posted in the other thread yesterday, but i'll say it again I actually really fw this and added it to my spotify

    only negative is the guy with the last verse brings the track down, no offense

    thanks really appreciate you!

  • Jun 29, 2020
    jawnz

    ty xxx

  • Jun 29, 2020
    fun guy

    where yall based?

    Amsterdam! you?

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    Niggamortis

    sounds all over the place and generic

    thanks for watchin still!

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    vipassanawarrior

    thanks for watchin still!

    Is this your first official song? I'm willing to spin some other stuff if you have it.

  • Jun 29, 2020

    first reply I'm crying

  • Jun 29, 2020
    Kanye mess

    bet my s*** would get moved to cs with quickness if i posted it here

    quick than quick, nigga

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    Niggamortis

    Is this your first official song? I'm willing to spin some other stuff if you have it.

    I have this song out with Higher Brothers.
    You can check my youtube account and spotify! <3

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    vipassanawarrior
    !https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yj8U_j0BDbQ

    This is just too generic, tbh. But I will say that you have a good delivery; your flow is a bit too one dimensional though. The other two rappers sound like Lil Xan1 (but forgot how to rap halfway through his verse) and Lil Xan2.

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    Op good luck with everything, but the song is ass

  • Jun 29, 2020
    Retired Artist

    This is just too generic, tbh. But I will say that you have a good delivery; your flow is a bit too one dimensional though. The other two rappers sound like Lil Xan1 (but forgot how to rap halfway through his verse) and Lil Xan2.

    ha yes the last guy gets called xan a lot
    thanks for the feedback!

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    Teal_

    Op good luck with everything, but the song is ass

    thanks for watching! <3

  • Jun 29, 2020
    math fifty

    and good luck with the 170 views

    move to cs

    thanks for taking the time out of ur day to hate!

  • Jun 29, 2020
    vipassanawarrior

    thanks for watching! <3

    just keep pushing yourself creatively and you'll improve

  • Jun 29, 2020

    OP u nice

    The asian dude is hard

    The white dude kinda sucks (why does he rap like that). Also tell him to cut his hair he looks like if cold pizza was a person

    Beat is weird but not bad, I like that ig

    Visuals seem 2 be ripped from Drain Gang + Goth Money, maybe try refining ur image? The segment w the asian dude was hard tho, he knows what he doing.

    (P.S. if yall ever lookin for beats holla at me. My email is killakbeatz305@​gmail.com, u can peep my yt here: youtube.com/channel/UCc-gnhxFyODHyDRLt3eCl9w)

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    Wow guys I have a whole thread named after me! How nice of op

  • Jun 29, 2020
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    OP has potential but I don’t love the song

  • Jun 29, 2020

    all love OP and u aint bad but this 14 sc s***, find a better lane if u wanna get big, gl

    not dont have an ego like that, u knew ppl were gonna roast u when u posted here, if u cant handle it already dont post here

    I understand that u put a lot of effort and dedicated yourself for your work and you should be proud of it but dont get mad at haters lol just get better thats the best way to show them

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