"Leave that p**** dead.. Gene Hackman"

just not a great bar

a hackman bar might be cool but hard to pull off even if you did something clever

try to play more with the 'pussy' aspect

I would say something like:
"Kill the p**** then I ghost her, Nekomata
leave her in the past, hit the club, f*** up some commas"

leave your family dead... Gene Hackman

I don’t love it!

On Von, it's time for bed broski.