Hey let me know that you think.

soundcloud.com/quintonheathen/racks-coming-in

This is dope!

If monotone is your delivery i would work on making it varied a little more so people can feel it a little more.

Check me out bro.

Hey cheers I appreciate your feedback, I 100% agree about the delivery what would you reccomend? I'm at a stage where I'm trying to find my sound, the hardest part has been trying to keep the flow 'alive' if yknow what I mean, I was thinking of just redoing it and empasizing words because thats all one long take. lmk. Also I f*** with your song but it needs more movement in the production. You listen and like the 1st 2 verses but then the beat doesn't reward you for listening if y'know what I mean. so when the 3rd part comes in the flow is still good but the beat still the same, thats just me though I like beats to be extra. I definetly fw it though your on the right direction imo

Thanks for the feedback, i hear you and yeah I agree some variation could help a lot.

Yeah, you're at the coolest part of music making.Did you produce this?
If so, find the craziest sounds/best samples, really experiment because when you find "your sound" it will be like nothing anyone has heard before AND you'll be the best at doing it.

Also, i would talk out your lyrics like an essay.

1.See the way your voice reacts to the emotions you convey

2.match that with your rap voice

3.??????

4.Profit

Yooo lotta gems in this, cheers.