i dm'd westside gunn wit a snippet of track 6 n he told me to email him a batch as soon as i can would luv some feedback

Yoooooo!! This is Hard!! thats my feedback lmao. This is that real luxurious rap music. Congrats on him hitting you back too! Go Crazy

appreciate that my brother! glad u enjoyed it

Great tape! If I were to give some feedback, I would personally only want (as a griselda fan) for Griselda to rap over "the sniff saviour's hymn" and "clint westwood" and I probably like "clint westwood" the most of the lot. Something I think a thing you could probably improve would maybe be the 'swing' of the drums/tracks, which I think can be a bit stiff which I think can be difficult to get 'right' on the slower tracks.

All in all great tape, with some cool ideas!

EDIT: mixing could ofc also improve

very valid criticism
i think my drums are my weakest point too n they feel too unnatural sometimes, something im trying 2 improve at
glad you enjoyed it nonetheless