I made this for an internship I applied for awhile back (unfortunately I didn’t get it). Tell me what y’all think. It was a spec commercial I made if Nike hired me lmao.

youtu.be/I5PqgYV71sA

bruh the climactic half of this is a guy getting knocked over repeatedly in WWI

then it just cuts to the nike icon

why was that your ender? bro i can't

LMAO you're right. In hindsight prob not the best choice, but I was just kinda f***ing around. It was if I had to make a commercial, how could I incorporate that into a Nike product. Ya know.

F*** the haters. This is dope. My feedback

1.) not the wisest choice to use kanye west to promote nike being that he has been extremely anti nike for a while

2.) i would have had the running scenes start when the hallelujah ramps up, and at the beginning just have people starting to run or realizing they need to run

Thank you for saying that fam! I genuinely do appreciate it.

1. I knew using Kanye in a Nike ad didn’t make much sense, but the song and the Hallelujah’s spoke to me. So i chose to use just the Hallelujah’s and not any Kanye vocals for that reason and to make it secular for non-religious people.

2. I’m an aspiring filmmaker and the idea you just said was my initial idea (great minds think alike). Only difference would be it would be just one person running in a single tracking shot.

Thanks for the feedback! 🙏🙏

This is fire. The last shot being from 1917 im not so convinced on though. Then it abruptly cuts so the editing on the song could be better. The idea overall though has huge potential

Who thumbed down OP’s video

Lol s*** had me dying when i saw 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂