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    Any grammar nazi's here? Need help with a sentence

    I may not have done everything I should or could have to capitalize on the priceless opportunity you provided however you did an amazing service not only consistently inviting me, but even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

  • Nessy 🦎
    Dec 20, 2019
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    laudi

    Any grammar nazi's here? Need help with a sentence

    I may not have done everything I should or could have to capitalize on the priceless opportunity you provided however you did an amazing service not only consistently inviting me, but even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

    Bro how is that only 1 sentence

  • Dec 20, 2019
    Nessy

    Bro how is that only 1 sentence

    seems long
    feels like there should be some comma splices and semicolons somewhere

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    laudi

    Any grammar nazi's here? Need help with a sentence

    I may not have done everything I should or could have to capitalize on the priceless opportunity you provided however you did an amazing service not only consistently inviting me, but even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

    However needs a comma

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    Nil

    However needs a comma

    I may not have done everything I should or could have to capitalize on the priceless opportunity you provided however, you did an amazing service not only consistently inviting me but even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

    I guess that works

  • Nessy 🦎
    Dec 20, 2019
    laudi

    I may not have done everything I should or could have to capitalize on the priceless opportunity you provided however, you did an amazing service not only consistently inviting me but even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

    I guess that works

    « provided. However, » no?

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    Also why don't you end it at amazing service. And start a new sentence wit You not only invited me consistently but also extended an invitation

  • Dec 20, 2019

    so happy to have good headphones again after i broke mine

  • Dec 20, 2019
    Ignance

    im so shattered blonde connecting with me emotionally ily frank

    Look bruh you dont need anyone but yourself. Enjoy your trip and stop thinkin so much about that thot.

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    Nil

    Also why don't you end it at amazing service. And start a new sentence wit You not only invited me consistently but also extended an invitation

    I may not have done everything I should have to capitalize on the priceless opportunities you provided; however, you did an amazing service. Not only consistently inviting me, but even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

    Thanks you and @Nessy

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    Ignance

    im so shattered blonde connecting with me emotionally ily frank

    It's not that serious

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    Durkio World

    It's not that serious

    endless so much better too

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    This is how I would freak it without changing much

    I may not have done everything I should (or could) have done to capitalize on the priceless opportunity you provided; however, you did an amazing service by inviting me and even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

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    Durkio World

    It's not that serious

    shut up b****

  • BM_ 🌠
    Dec 20, 2019

    Ignance wild

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    BRAVE
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    This is how I would freak it without changing much

    I may not have done everything I should (or could) have done to capitalize on the priceless opportunity you provided; however, you did an amazing service by inviting me and even extending an invitation to me on my final year of eligibility.

    that semi-colon after however is brazy

  • Dec 20, 2019

    i love that b****

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    laudi

    that semi-colon after however is brazy

    Its bold; & provocative

  • Dec 20, 2019
    XANTA

    Its bold; & provocative

    IT GETS THE PEOPLE GOING

  • Dec 20, 2019
    laudi

    that semi-colon after however is brazy

    My bad it's before

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    laudi

    endless so much better too

    Terrible album.

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    Durkio World

    Terrible album.

  • Dec 20, 2019
    laudi

  • Dec 21, 2019

    7:00
    TIME TO PLAYYYYY
    FAMILYYYY FEUDDDD

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