I think he needs to C a mental health professional, OP seems like he’d scare the hoes
Mentally I’m doing fine. Novelty writing actually helps lol. Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot. Thanks for being concerned. Really though
I think he needs to C a mental health professional, OP seems like he’d scare the hoes
He needs to C himself out of society
This is worse than bad
It's quite terrible
What could be improved? Thanks for criticism aswell
"Kept a secret my father always gets a handjob out of me. We consider this our bonding and love for each other as men. I love you Eddie"

"Kept a secret my father always gets a handjob out of me. We consider this our bonding and love for each other as men. I love you Eddie"

You submitted this in a college class?
Yea. They don’t judge subject matter. They judge the writing itself. It’s a beginner course so I passed. My professor did mention he was concerned but he noted he’s heard worse (which I don’t believe lol)
who da f*** made this man
Yea. They don’t judge subject matter. They judge the writing itself. It’s a beginner course so I passed. My professor did mention he was concerned but he noted he’s heard worse (which I don’t believe lol)
how did you end up choosing this as the subject matter
op wrote this as a college paper
Yea. They don’t judge subject matter. They judge the writing itself. It’s a beginner course so I passed. My professor did mention he was concerned but he noted he’s heard worse (which I don’t believe lol)
always interested in short stories. you should update and post more if its really a passion
Mentally I’m doing fine. Novelty writing actually helps lol. Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot. Thanks for being concerned. Really though
“Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot.”
haha son an incest relationship HAHAhhaha that’s such a joke...unless....

Mentally I’m doing fine. Novelty writing actually helps lol. Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot. Thanks for being concerned. Really though
Yall joke about it