That beat is f***ing nice especially that little whistle/flute sound during the chorus breakdown.
Both verses did the job. Your choice of melody during the 1st verse was good, but my favorite part was towards the end before the hook
"I took some time to help myself, I swear these hoes are just bad for my health"
I definitely got some Travis Scott vibes from the way you sung those lines out. Nice job.
That beat is f***ing nice especially that little whistle/flute sound during the chorus breakdown.
Both verses did the job. Your choice of melody during the 1st verse was good, but my favorite part was towards the end before the hook
"I took some time to help myself, I swear these hoes are just bad for my health"
I definitely got some Travis Scott vibes from the way you sung those lines out. Nice job.
thanks bro means alot tried to something different ! deff gotta ad more adlibs I feel like in the verse I added none