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U have potential I think this song is too safe

Thanks for taking the time, feel that

Yeah I see the vision. I think the parts without harmonies are really bland. Don’t know what to do about it but you’ll figure it out

But the harmonies are hard

Thanks bro. I work a lot on those so its nice to hear. I was trying to keep things simple, and you never really know how others will percieve it. I think ill just chalk this one up to a learning experience and move on to the next one

definitely move on to the next one as soon as you can. yr voice has potential for sure, its just a matter of prying out what you really want to sing about.

being brutally honest, i dont feel you care about what yr singing about in this track. the lyrics are a weak point for sure. i dont think i would have listened to the full thing if not for yr voice.
the production is another weak point imo - that wubby synth is smthn, but the rest (especially the drums) feel very stock.

all that to say, dont be afraid to use existing productions to hone in on yr writing. you dont need to be a jack of all trades.
if i were you, with yr knack for harmony, i would try to pump out as many songs as i could over jai paul instrumentals.
keep yr focus on yr voice, because it is special. songwriting takes time and countless scrapped songs, but please keep at it.

Appreciate this one a lot. I will definitely keep at it