Nov 6, 2023·1 reply
Mmm HmmSummary is basically
You need to work on voice influctuations (I think that's the word?)
Emphasis on important words u want the listener to get
Cuz alot of the words u say feels like a run on sentence unless I'm heavily paying attention or u stop the best for a second
I think u got alot of good bars lost in the speed of ur raps
I think if you slowed down they would hit harderBest selection was good
I like ur flows
Just need to add more passion to ur delivery
Also I felt alot of Tyler influence and
like one Kenny influence on track 13 I thinkMaybe some wutang?
thanks bro, that was my first mixtape that i recorded and released myself
i made all beats but track 1,4,5, and 12
also i was confused about that lol, theres only 12 songs
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- Mmm Hmm 😆OPNov 6, 2023·2 replies
Bro0o0sesBut I think my handwriting is good
Or at least good enough
I like cursive
They should teach it
I heard they discarded it
My schools didn't teach it
Nov 6, 2023·1 replyBro0o0sesBut I think my handwriting is good
Or at least good enough
Broh this is illegible
- Nov 6, 2023·1 replyMmm Hmm
I like cursive
They should teach it
I heard they discarded it
My schools didn't teach it
Aren't you older than me ?
They still taught cursive when I was in school
- Nov 6, 2023Mmm Hmm
I like cursive
They should teach it
I heard they discarded it
My schools didn't teach it
Cus cursive is useless
- Nov 6, 2023frenchpress
Broh this is illegible
Fluffy cat can't read cursive
Everyone point and laugh
- Mmm Hmm 😆OPNov 6, 2023Valid
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Can u pin this thread in music sxn
Also can u pay me for keeping music section alive and fun
Thanks
- Nov 6, 2023·1 replyim almost there
@Mmm_Hmm @SwilloLoubeaux @Uhhhhhh my first mixtape from 2017, lmk what yall think breddas
https://soundcloud.com/officialtonyknocks/sets/thanks-for-everything?si=43f03aeb18974ddd806baf165e0a57ca&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Ey bro you sound like that video Earl sweatshirt raps like this but you really rap like that
- Nov 6, 2023·1 replyValid
tf happened to ur main
nuked like last month lol
- Nov 6, 2023·1 replyim almost there
nuked like last month lol
tf you do
- Mmm Hmm 😆OPNov 6, 2023·1 replyim almost there
thanks bro, that was my first mixtape that i recorded and released myself
i made all beats but track 1,4,5, and 12
also i was confused about that lol, theres only 12 songs
Hmmm
Whenever there was a long son I assumed a new track was starting
I didn't listen on SoundCloud but I'm browser
- Mmm Hmm 😆OPNov 6, 2023·1 replyBro0o0ses
Aren't you older than me ?
They still taught cursive when I was in school
Might be area based
- Nov 6, 2023·1 replyMmm Hmm
2. Vocals sounded low, voice way too monotone, need voice fluctuations
9. You not even tryna try
sht is all over the place10. Good, might as well get rid of that hook tho the 2x2 hook lol
i need reviews like this, thank you bro fr
- Nov 6, 2023Mmm Hmm
Might be area based
Maybe
I prefer cursive to printing
It's all curly and fun
I think it is less choppy than printing too
- Nov 6, 2023
More of a flow to it
- Mmm Hmm 😆OPNov 6, 2023·1 replyim almost there
i need reviews like this, thank you bro fr
I'm still ready to make the new slaughter house group tho with u me and @SwilloLoubeaux
Ur inspiring me
- Mmm Hmm 😆OPNov 6, 2023·1 reply
Out of all the creative sxn users on ktt
@earlymann def got the bars fr
- Nov 6, 2023Valid
Ey bro you sound like that video Earl sweatshirt raps like this but you really rap like that
i mean i am @earlyman for a reason
- Nov 6, 2023Valid
tf you do
saveme and bruises scuffle
i caught a stray
- Nov 6, 2023
nice catching up with you boys but im going back to the coli
pip pip ta doodly doo
Nov 6, 2023·2 repliesthis is video of the year. not bumping that thread with that ridiculous ass title lol
KUDOS MEG
- Nov 6, 2023Mmm Hmm
Hmmm
Whenever there was a long son I assumed a new track was starting
I didn't listen on SoundCloud but I'm browser
let me reread the review with this in mind 
Nov 6, 2023·1 reply
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- KOREA SPICE 🇰🇷Nov 6, 2023·1 replyxxxkiraxxx
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