Anyone like The-Dream?

will listen in a sec

Can I listen

pls do

need the bruisey breakdown before its certified

Aight

So I f*** wit the production

But ur voice is too monotone
It's killing the vibes

I think u should use some vocal inflections or something to make it more "alive"

i dont like music like this it feels silly to me

she got aoty

spoke too soon it just got cool

noted, thanks op

will include more emotion and tone

yessss more slow day action

more ktt for me

i be yawning off the caffeine lol

this part reminds me of prince

proto-polyphia

I think

Rhythmically it's a little too choppy and the beat isn't quite meshing with your rapping

You sound a tiny bit robotic or stiff so the like weird rhythm you're going for doesn't really work with the beat it sounds unnatural

But the production is cool and you are like rapping well you just need to make it mesh with the beat better and put some emotion into it

lmao lockjaw went 15-0

love this guitar tone

i get exactly what you're saying, thank u bruisey

ive been trying to make the robotic voice work since 2018 but its inconsistent lol

ill keep these notes in mind moving forward

lets get this money yall

i like the instrumental but i dont have a taste for vocals like this

Booooooooooo

this month started off so s*** with my stock moves but i think im up a rack overall now this month so im chillin