Okay creatives, I’m back with another video

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  • Jun 19, 2020
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    You guys are my favorite reviewers for always being brutally honest, but I always appreciate every valid opinion. Can I get some thoughts on this song?

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    SuperMcfly

    You guys are my favorite reviewers for always being brutally honest, but I always appreciate every valid opinion. Can I get some thoughts on this song?

    !https://youtu.be/jQ2iD-_LnPQ

    For the song: The beats really dope. The vocals have a nice melody, I feel like the delivery could use some work. Good voice though 👍🏻

    For the video: I like the aesthetics of the VHS tapes (it’s a bit overdone but I’m still a sucker for it lol). But the switch to the modern tapes was kind of jarring and I feel like it would’ve been more pleasing if there were some effects or color correction on the modern tapes. Lastly, having the tapes be B-roll to shots of the vocals being delivered would have made the video more entertaining I think. Might sound like I’m being super critical, but really I liked it and thought it was good, just some suggestions

  • Jun 20, 2020
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    SuperMcfly

    You guys are my favorite reviewers for always being brutally honest, but I always appreciate every valid opinion. Can I get some thoughts on this song?

    !https://youtu.be/jQ2iD-_LnPQ

    The melody is too basic, sound almost like a nursery rhyme; you need to also work on your delivery, and flow - as it's too tedious. The production sounds like wallpaper, nondescript. Keep working

  • Jun 20, 2020
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    Theory

    For the song: The beats really dope. The vocals have a nice melody, I feel like the delivery could use some work. Good voice though 👍🏻

    For the video: I like the aesthetics of the VHS tapes (it’s a bit overdone but I’m still a sucker for it lol). But the switch to the modern tapes was kind of jarring and I feel like it would’ve been more pleasing if there were some effects or color correction on the modern tapes. Lastly, having the tapes be B-roll to shots of the vocals being delivered would have made the video more entertaining I think. Might sound like I’m being super critical, but really I liked it and thought it was good, just some suggestions

    Thanks for the feedback. I put the video together in like 10 mins on my iPad, didn’t really put to much effort into it.

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    Retired Artist

    The melody is too basic, sound almost like a nursery rhyme; you need to also work on your delivery, and flow - as it's too tedious. The production sounds like wallpaper, nondescript. Keep working

    Thanks for your feedback; kinda sounds like you’re describing your music tbh minus the melody part which I couldn’t find any on your songs. Also, you sound like a billy goat who ate Post Malone. Can barely hear your words cause you left your voice in the basement, it sounds like a 13 year old who just broke puberty. Keep working as well

  • SuperMcfly

    Thanks for your feedback; kinda sounds like you’re describing your music tbh minus the melody part which I couldn’t find any on your songs. Also, you sound like a billy goat who ate Post Malone. Can barely hear your words cause you left your voice in the basement, it sounds like a 13 year old who just broke puberty. Keep working as well

    If you say so.