https://drive.google.com/file/d/1e0HmQ4PpSS2trCaklSco7SlAFc-e1Pyn/view?usp=drivesdk
spoken word vibe and im rockin wit it
spoken word vibe and im rockin wit it
Thank you very much. I’m putting together an album called ‘The Waviness of Wakin Up’. It’s supposed to be rap music for healing. You put it on in the morning and it’s like meditation, it helps you want to get up and do s***.
worked on this over the past two days
this fire
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1e0HmQ4PpSS2trCaklSco7SlAFc-e1Pyn/view?usp=drivesdk
I listened to it. think you got a really unique voice/delivery which is dope, could smooth it out more though
i think the middle/second part is much better vocally relative to the first, and there were even some parts where I saw some crazy potential (~1min mark)
side note but you might want to try experiment w vocal effects/autotune/etc. because I could see some really interesting outcomes there. at the same time the rawness of your delivery works well here so maybe not
lyrically there are some really poignant bars on here and some that are a little too on-the-nose. i.e. the part about the guy posting on FB but not calling you feels subtle/specific and genuine. the part about free will feels too blunt
instrumentally its cool, could maybe do something more w the drums as the song progresses. guitar at the end is nice
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1e0HmQ4PpSS2trCaklSco7SlAFc-e1Pyn/view?usp=drivesdk
also liked the line about honesty and learning
Aye, @Tkken thats real, I appreciate you
Imma process all your thoughts and let that pass through me
Might post again here with the next update
Aye, @Tkken thats real, I appreciate you
Imma process all your thoughts and let that pass through me
Might post again here with the next update
anytime man i enjoyed the listen. looking forward to seeing where you go with it
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