criticize this as harshly as you can. what should i change, keep, or remove entirely? just looking to learn.

centipede

might just be cuz im fried but this kinda hitting no lie. the vid is kinda some seizure s*** though so id watch out with that

I could see people online listening to this especially if it was little more refined.

tbh idek what to criticize because for what you were doing you did it pretty solidly. This could be the soundtrack to some sketch s*** in a cyberpunk movie. The end kinda hurt my brain though not gonna lie bc of how much was going on

lolll i see what u mean, thank u man, your feedback is really appreciated. gonna refine everything the best i can

definitely could polish this up but this some hard s*** reminds of Ash Koosha. Maybe eq the low end and high end to make the high end more sparkly and the low end hit harder wit a beefier sub or some s***

could find something like this on ninja tune

how u get those glitzy glitchy synths? arps run thru some effects?

ty for the feedback i really do appreciate it. after reading your suggestion and re-listening to the mix i definitely understand where youre coming from

exactly!

bless

imma needa experiment with that, ive wanted to mix that sort of s*** wit rnb and trap for time

where do you get you're arps from omnisphere? do you have any tips for that sort of sound

nice, keep making weird s*** OP its only gonna get better from here bro

this has some cool ideas i didnt hate it

the arp in this track was from sonic cat's purity and i just used a bitcrusher on it

im super new to producing so i dont have a ton of helpful tips... all i know is what i did! but i hope to continue to learn and experiment :)

This is incredible bro, dont think Ive heard anything like this before

I personally wouldve loved to hear an evil ass bass on this too lmao

The ending reminded me of something from the Uncut Gems score but way different

Maybe check my ish out too?

soundcloud.com/ace-el-rahim/first-drop-prod-by-ffjodor-lopes

ty, your feedback really means a lot.

checked out your track, i like it! the ideas and execution of those ideas were solid + stayed interesting and consistent throughout. kept me listening! left a like

Thank you for that man