what are yall thots ?

That s*** wack.

there's definite potential.
id say make like at least 10 more full demos of this caliber and one of those is going to be very very good. I'd say the lead instrument needs more effects honestly it sounds a bit too good. Mixing overrall sounds really good and the parts where you layer your vocals are the best so maybe try to layer the verses? keep going

lol thanks. this is because i said you were dyslexic for your thread title

im sorry if that really hurt your feelings. i was just joking

thanks man! i will take this feedback into consideration as much as possible.

and you're definitely right about just keeping making them over and over. it feels like you cant ever control which ones are going to be really good, just sometimes happens

exactly. u could wake up tomorrow and make your best work yet thats what i like about making music

so just gotta keep going make as much music as u can