It's Blaccmass remix, he's friends with Bari and must've asked Ye to play it at the show

So Moon having the same 2 lines repeated is bad but Street Lights having the same 4 lines repeated is fine hmmm

This is what happens when people only listen to rap music and more specifically watered down type beat trap music

it's double the lines cuz

Moon also follows the same melody as Hurricane so it only being 2 repeated lines on top of a recycled melody just makes it even more redundant of a song.

Only hurricane needs serious work tbh. Cut the pop smoke track. Everything else is pretty great. Just better mixing and it’s ready

you aint like Moon?

Remove Kanye verse on Hurricane and f***ing fork the money over to CyHi to write for him

Replace mumble s*** with actual lyrics

Mix and master the songs correctly

Remove Remote and give Junya to Carti for his own single/album

Add all the tracks that apparently were on the LV listening party but not at ATL. I don't know about this since I didn't listen to any of the snippets

There you go, you have a very solid Kanye album. Probably better than TLOP.

Actually good verses from Ye...

You describing Junya tho

I agree except we obviously need to get some coherent verses in favor of the mumbles and then a verse altogeher on No Child Left Behind and Praise God. I don’t even really hate hurricane as is I just have no idea what they were thinking drowning the hook in autotune

Not sure what it’s called but he absolutely has to add that outro track he played in Vegas

Also need to add This is the glory, believe what I say, KMSA, LOTP

Jail needs a better Jay z verse
That Jay verse is some ass

Just find it weird that an album with songs like Junya and Remote is named after his mother and features clips of her giving a speech about family

I want more Moon, not less.

Didn’t like the numerous name drops to Kanye’s songs?

There’s no way he didn’t write the junya s*** a couple days before after the bucks won lol

its cause he took the speeches from the other version of the actually finished album and spliced it into this mixtape

I don’t really care about drums, production is on point. Some songs are fine, im completely ok with hurricane as a more free flowing track. Need cut tracks from LV show, and others added back, couple songs need work like praise god, no child left behind. But it doesn’t need much to get that final push

I'll just assume mixing will be on point by then.

• More Ye verses
• More rap heavy songs
• Hurricane rework
• God Breathed on this needs a proper drop

You said add songs you’ve never even heard and the album would be better

Jail verse is biking verse tier, and I love biking so it may grow on me. But idk, it’s definitely a weak jay verse