Just made this lmk what you think.

soundcloud.com/quintonheathen/camp-rock-19420-122-pm

flow lowkey hard if u actually tried to make this s*** listenable

hahah cheers I have this bummy mic that I've dropped too many times so i've just been working on lyrics n flow n s***. Finna drop a polished piece of work when I get my money right and have a week or two where I'm just chilling. Got any stuff I can listen to?

Ayo Quinton, that flow is ridiculous but it sounds like your whispering at 3am incase your mum hears you rapping haha, don't take that the wrong way

Mad potential but hard to assess unless that rather large issue gets cleared up lol

If you wanna give an opinion on the flip side, here's a brand new one for ya chief

soundcloud.com/ziggyblockley/closure-feat-tamara?in=ziggyblockley/sets/snowball-effect-mixtape

Your production and vibe is really good, also your voice at the start is very nice, when that chick comes through I wasn't expecting that. I'd say you have pretty much all the elements of being able to make good tracks, I'd just work on what your trying to say and why, I'm not rewarded for listening because in the first few lyrics I feel as though I know what the rest of the song will be about. Really fw it when the two of you are singing together, keep going bro your on the right way.

had to listen twice to pick up on some of the different flows you used. u went off for sure i just wish i could understand u more, excited to hear a more polished piece from you.

do me a solid and leave a like or comment on this, thanks man!

I appreciate the depth to that brother, for real, much obliged. Mhm, I suppose the story does move in the direction you'd expect, although I like to feel I got a couple clever lines off haha.

Thanks for the love though bro, good luck sorting the mic situation because your flow is THERE dude

Ay bro your links dead. This is a better version I just made if you wanna listen soundcloud.com/quintonheathen/camp-rock-freestyle-but-you-can-hear-the-vocals

True I re-listened and see what your saying, I swear if just needs to have more of an energy build up and drop. Honestly though f*** me and my opinion because that chorus is amazing and I'd never be able to make something like that.

the cadence is there fam
at this point i would just keep working on perfecting my craft if i were you. keep experimenting!