BlueDream

9mo

I genuinely don’t know if I’m missing something with the bicycle line .
Like tf do you mean you like her on a bicycle ???

Skinn Foley

9mo

Top 5 best lines:

"And they scared of the 7,
Back to 1-3 then we turn up 11,
Keep that s*** open like 7/11"

"Quarterback plays,
I don't f*** with 12 except Tom Brady"

"Got two twins, they top tier, that's my favorite fetish,
Deep in her throat til she tear, that's her favorite beverage"

"Storm's a minor but you know she living major"

"You in God's Country, not in Montgomery,
Go Ted Bundy, then go home and play Al Bundy,"

Stream Utopia on all major DSPs, Circus Maximus now available FOR FREE on Youtube, FATD and Almighty So 2 otw, RIP to Gangsta Boo, Real Music is Back

Skinn Foley

9mo

Top 5 best lines:

"And they scared of the 7,
Back to 1-3 then we turn up 11,
Keep that s*** open like 7/11"

"Quarterback plays,
I don't f*** with 12 except Tom Brady"

"Got two twins, they top tier, that's my favorite fetish,
Deep in her throat til she tear, that's her favorite beverage"

"Storm's a minor but you know she living major"

"You in God's Country, not in Montgomery,
Go Ted Bundy, then go home and play Al Bundy,"

Stream Utopia on all major DSPs, Circus Maximus now available FOR FREE on Youtube, FATD and Almighty So 2 otw, RIP to Gangsta Boo, Real Music is Back

Knx

9mo

damn, this guy's pen game sucks.

Vibe

9mo

I think people focus too much on his lyrics to try and discredit the album but his worst writing is definitely on God's Country

o b d o

9mo

i think it's too much to look away from it

Vibe

9mo

There's a lot of writing that people overlook on Utopia just to bash it imo

His last verse on Meltdown he disses Rocky the entire time, verse is hard af and stays on subject

My Eyes as a whole is great, and references Astro Fest

Sirens is good

The ending of Skitzo is great regardless of who wrote it or not

I think people just kind of lean on the writing as a way to bash the album since it's low hanging fruit but it's kind of being exaggerated

o b d o

9mo

even if all of what you listed was good, it's still not enough in quantity and quality imo

he's also being hypocritical as hell on my eyes

Vibe

9mo

List the songs that aren't good writing wise

It's pretty easy to just say a blanket statement of "the writing's not good"

Until you have to be specific

o b d o

9mo

probably every song tbh

at it's worst he's speaking gibbering and just being too generic and uninteresting

and at his best it's also just okay

Vibe

9mo

I cut some off, I had to better myself
Against the odds, I'd bet on myself
I was the Frank Givens before Thanksgiving, thanks to my health
Too many flaws, tryna generate wealth
Man, that's how you go broke and lose bros and lose hope in this s***
I was thinking that we both could be rich, I guess it's one-sided
Crazy how they love to talk s*** and got no Trident
I'm loyal b****, I got Ye over Biden
I let the s*** go off the top, yeah no typing
How I go from overlooked to these n* is overbiting?
How I'm always in they ear? I'm enticing
And you ain't gotta take it from me, I'm advising for real

Vibe

9mo

name a single song it should be pretty easy

like I just said above I think God's country writing is trash. But i'm also not hating on the entire album

Vibe

9mo

Whoever wrote this is one thing but to immediately write off the entire album as just being garbage writing wise is crazy

o b d o

9mo

this doesn't make the rest of the album better
it also comes way too late after two forgettable verses

o b d o

9mo

my eyes verses are crazy overrated, first one is straight ass
modern jam
circus maximum too

i can't name you a good verse tbh, hyena and thank god are decent i guess