What we thinking?

1. Please for the love of god dont market yourself as “white boy”

2. Bring a little more personality and fun to it, it looks like ur taking yourself just a little too serious

Overall not a bad track at all though really well produced and mixed, the vocals sound clean and crisp

^ I agree don't market yourself as white boy or anything like that

do what you want but it throws a weird vibe

there were some really good lines in here!

Honestly I just did that for clickbait but thank you for the feedback 🙏🏼

Thank you 🙏🏼 also as I said above I did that for clickbait lmao

this is a solid. Flow crazy. You remind me of Drake. Where you from? @pinkpolo

Thank you bro. I’m from Providence, Rhode Island. Feel free to follow me on social media for more music @knellzRI

good s*** man, dont quit, try to be more goofy idk, and dont do that white boy s***

Appreciate you listening man thank you for the feedback

yeah bro, i eventually want to start posting s***, stuff like this is my inspiration, keep pushing man, we gotta help each other out

Do it man

I dont know the first thing about making beats but ive been messing around with garageband idk

if u really wanna learn how to make some beats look up tutorials, type beat tutorials, music theory n s***

everyone starts somewhere, when i first started making beats my s*** sounded like video game music lol but s***s starting to get good now, if ur serious bout this get to it

Face isn't expressive enough in the video. Track is fine, but the chorus doesn't really stick out from the verses. Maybe look for angles to explore more deeply than throwaway punches. It's a pretty refined product. Good job.

I'd say the "white boy" headline is cheap but looking at your thread traffic versus most creative posts tells me it worked.

Youtube, link with other producers. Honestly there’s nothing that works more than putting in the time

Thanks for the feedback man

I have other videos on YouTube if you’re interested in some other stuff too

Feel free to post your music people