Aye what's really good, yall?

Out here with another track. Cooked this up hella quick. Changing up my workflow a bit cause I'm looking to be a tad bit more consistent with my approach.

Production-wise...been working on being disciplined with the amount of concurrent tracks. The arrangement is def more important now for me. Need to begin and end smoothly...(in the past I would just come in/come out)

Lyrically, I'm learning how to fit in more poetic cadences in my music. I have a "flow" that I sometimes deviate from. ...not really punchline heavy but the word clipping/parallel structure creates a vacuum in the prosody that I fill in at my leisure. It's a "forced cadence". I've likely referred to it before.

Anyway, this one is called Saturn. Hope y'all enjoy. Thank you for listening!

EDIT: the last few bars are jumbled, . I might have to get SoundCloud Premium…I’ve a few edits that are nice. Maybe arrange a little mixtape.

This one's real smooth. Love the beat and while I haven't heard your earlier songs, I like this inflection in your voice. It has a nice cadence, feels like it's doing little flips at the end of certain words. Lol, had a hard time explaining that last part, but keep up the good work

Thank you so much for the feedback. It was hard for me to explain it too lol. I've got a bunch of songs . I'm sort of still learning how to construct them. I'm mostly just figuring out how to be disciplined with my arrangements/get my ideas out there in a tangible form.