Was playing with automation on the hook with this one, just having fun putting a spin on a generic topic, lemme know what you think!

If you want me to critique something you've done, link me below

Dope!!!...Great work man!!!...I like the autotune...the melodies and flow are on point!!!...Keep up the great work bro!!!...💯

Your flow is really good and you got a talent for melodies. Something sounds off to me about how the vocals are produced. They sound a little dry so maybe more reverb? Maybe it's the microphone

Appreciate it my brother, much obliged!

And RoHoe, thank you too chief. It's weird man, to some it sounds too dry, to others too reverby...I think I've screwed something up with this new limiter I was trying haha.

Luckily Soundcloud Pro let's me switch files should it be too much of an issue, can always re-mix it

Listening with my studio headphones I actually don't think the reverb is an issue. Maybe a little more boost in the low end of your voice could make it feel a little more full

hold up, this s*** is hard bro. your voice is so dope too, the way you flowing on this beat is insane. keep it up bro

Good call, I think I thinned it out a little much and dipped the EQ around 1k, can tell it was an older mix and I never quite fixed all the rookie errors I'd have made back in 2016/17, whenever it was first punched in lol

Thanks again broski

Thank you man, you give me a voice like yours and they'd call that 'the full package' haha

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