I need content during lockdown so I'm thinking about making a project.. depends what ppl think of s*** like this though..

No dude. This isn't a good sound for you.

what about it don't you like, can you be more specific

The song too compressed first off

The singing isn't for you but you can rap which is nice and have flow

What type of style you tryna go for?

iono i don't really have a defined style just whatever i'm feeling

If you just messing around that's cool tbh

Personally I think.you would sound better just rapping with minimal autotune and not using a slower beat like that

Use a beat like this and I could see you spitting some fire over it

Let me write some music for you tbh

nigga this sound like a toddler screaming for a titty on a trap beat

edit: to give you some good criticism work on your voice and your flow.
it's sounds way too amateurish and non distinct.

don't try and fight the beat and move to CS immediately.

save your self esteem

I hated it and was bout to turn it off till I realized I actually f*** wit it

I have feedback. I got things to say, but I’m too zooted lmao. U fly tho. What’s your ig? I hope your ig aesthetic says somn

David e cosign coming

not gonna lie i do like that beat.. i was really just into the bird sounds on this one.. I thought it was cool af.

"whippin around in the ferrari/bad girl got that body/ she about to smoke my salami"

here's the best way to get to know me

Yeah it was a cool beat, I just don't think it's ur style.

Check this out bro

Let me write some lines for this

And f*** what that dude sayin. Use more auto candy on your vocals and stretch it even harder wit the flow.

Before I was gon turn it off, u hit a crazy flow but the autotune was working u up to it.

Intro:
Hook If you ain't know about me (now you know)
If you ain't know about me (now you know) (yeah)
If you ain't know about me (now you know) (uh)
If you ain't know about me (now you know) (shit)

Verse one:
Uber wit' my Acura/ Suck me dry like she Dracula/

Nah bro the autotune sounds bad. He got flow but he needs to speed it up a little bit. The slow s*** ain't that good.

Enough of that emo sounding stuff it's 2020

btw the song is all references from my videos.. ninja turtle is a line about a girl in my car in the 1st vid.. the master splinter is a shooter i shot a video with about corona, he brought a mask that made him look like master splinter.. we were gonna shoot a different video.

S*** man that's pretty dope tho, maybe we can incorporate that into this new song with the beat I'm suggesting lol

I've got a bunch of beats like those. so i can easily incorporate them into the project. I like auto tune so i don't see it completely leaving but I can def go over beats like those.. have to keep this one with the ravens tho I just love the way they sound

Sounds good lol

I'm already writing you a song up there

that's whats up

Feel free to use those two lines lmao it's all I got right niw

that s*** was fire ngl

We heard different things because of different perspectives and taste.

I found his “bad notes” to be jazzy more than wrongheaded.

Good tv