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  • Mar 25, 2020
    Uber Shooter

    Good tv

    I f*** with your name ngl

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    So the general consensus to make a project then? I'm down if that's the case.

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Captain Morgan

    So the general consensus to make a project then? I'm down if that's the case.

    Practice ur craft

  • Mar 25, 2020
    Captain Morgan

    I need content during lockdown so I'm thinking about making a project.. depends what ppl think of s*** like this though..

    https://soundcloud.com/its-caesars-palace/lock-down

    Lacks focus. & direction

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Spacely

    Practice ur craft

    no better way to practice then to make some music

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Captain Morgan

    no better way to practice then to make some music

    Yep fosho rooting for u

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Spacely

    Yep fosho rooting for u

    you just made my day

  • Mar 25, 2020
    Captain Morgan

    you just made my day

    I’m glad put in the work bro, that’s what I’m planning to do

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    RXHalfDeadCaliban

    nigga this sound like a toddler screaming for a titty on a trap beat

    edit: to give you some good criticism work on your voice and your flow.
    it's sounds way too amateurish and non distinct.

    don't try and fight the beat and move to CS immediately.

    save your self esteem

    You still living under the ambassador bridge or you relocate with the lock-down?

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Captain Morgan

    You still living under the ambassador bridge or you relocate with the lock-down?

    ?

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    RXHalfDeadCaliban

    ?

    i changed the post to what I wanted it to say.. you sound like a troll

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Captain Morgan

    i changed the post to what I wanted it to say.. you sound like a troll

    . . . g.

    I said what I said.

    your flow songs like a toddler screaming for a titty on a trap beat.
    especially this part right here.(0:31-0:52)

    "winner winner chicken dinner" was a country rap inflection we don't need to hear.

    the beat is aight . . . you need to work on what you do and how you sound maybe vocal lessons. maybe push ups.

    or maybe by growing some balls and taking some criticism

    until then continue on with your yes men
    a.k.a. master splinter with the splinters

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    RXHalfDeadCaliban

    . . . g.

    I said what I said.

    your flow songs like a toddler screaming for a titty on a trap beat.
    especially this part right here.(0:31-0:52)

    "winner winner chicken dinner" was a country rap inflection we don't need to hear.

    the beat is aight . . . you need to work on what you do and how you sound maybe vocal lessons. maybe push ups.

    or maybe by growing some balls and taking some criticism

    until then continue on with your yes men
    a.k.a. master splinter with the splinters

    I get it, you don't have anything nice to say. Noted.

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Captain Morgan

    You still living under the ambassador bridge or you relocate with the lock-down?

    referencing ambassador bridge on ktt

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    FKA Ashe

    referencing ambassador bridge on ktt

    I'm from the D, so gotta represent lol

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    Captain Morgan

    I'm from the D, so gotta represent lol

    real s*** eh im on the other side

  • Mar 25, 2020
    FKA Ashe

    real s*** eh im on the other side

    that's whats up

  • Captain Morgan

    I get it, you don't have anything nice to say. Noted.

    . . . idk what else to like say to you as a grown man.

    the thread title is do you guys like this sound?

    I chose to post about how you sounded.
    It needs some work. work on it.
    it sounds amateurish because you haven't put in enough work
    to have your voice be impactful.
    you can do a lot of strength training with your voice.
    diaphragm exercises, nasal positioning, etc.

    the beat is aight but if you sound weak
    ain't no beat gonna save you

    your lyrics could be great
    but if you sound weak . . .
    you'll prolly be able to get a pass

    but that's a probably.

    truly listen to yourself and critique yourself.
    ask if this is the right pacing for your lyrics.
    ask if you're getting enough breaths in between syllables.
    try and do something with no punch-ins.

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    I don't mind feedback, it was the screeching toddler comment that evoked my response. You can miss me with all that disrespectful internet s***.

  • Mar 25, 2020

    i'm gonna let the p**** part slide because you followed it up with some nice stuff, just know you wouldn't say that s*** to my face.

  • Mar 25, 2020
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    The beat is fire

    The way you come in on the verses is fire

    The way you keep going with the same cadence and flow for the entire track isnt fire

    Need more vocal variety imo

  • So like others have said, your craft needs work

  • Mar 25, 2020
    HITSLIKEDIETCOKE

    The beat is fire

    The way you come in on the verses is fire

    The way you keep going with the same cadence and flow for the entire track isnt fire

    Need more vocal variety imo

    that's whats up, I have a variety of colors I can paint with.. there might of been too much blue in this lol.. next time I'll add a bit more spice