Jan 27, 2022
VizeGuyAs a graphic designer the drop shadow on the body of text makes me angry idk why
it made me very angry... and then i read "graphic design" on the cover letter and felt
?????
Jan 27, 2022Someone post that graphic design is my passion meme
Jan 27, 2022VizeGuyAre you applying to KTT
rvi ⚡Jan 27, 2022·1 reply"attendees ranging from 30 to 105<"
105< doesnt make sense, idk what youre trying to say there. 105+?
Jan 27, 2022At first glance, the only thing I dislike about it is the “hi” at the beginning… sounds too informal. It looks alright layout wise though.
- Jan 27, 2022·edited·4 replies
hot pancakesyeah the resume is wayyyyy too packed imo
also skills and interests seem all over the place, i suggest tailoring your resume to each position you are applying for, even if that means having different versions of your resume
ya
i cant tell if op is looking for feedback or not, but according to the first half of the cover letter, it feels like ops applying to marketing/branding/communicationbut then says he wants to work in
-architecture
-agriculture (seems broad???)
-aerospace engineeringif im nasa, why the f*** am i going to hire you based on your cover letter? all i can tell is that you like esports and can organize some sorta gaming event. that has f*** all to do with aerospace engineering
mba has nothing to do with aerospace engineering
it doesnt feel op is serious about it at all, so why include it or apply to anything aerospace engineering related????also just say founder of the startup.... ceo makes me wonder why your applying to jobs--is it that your startup isnt doing well? if it isn't, why not?
idk mannnnn i dont mean to be a debbie downer, op but
i dont feel like the experience you have merits 2 pages of resume... a lot of these are just 3 month engagements. especially with the magazine gig--again, how is that relevant to aerospace, agriculture, or architecture. i dont think it would be paid either since its the school magazine? essentially a school club? theres also a grammatical error in the last bullet point of the magazine editor section. if im any of the fields your into, knowing you were the 'on-site technical and managerial operative for centenary college athletics' tells me f*** all about how youre going to do at my joboverall, reading your resume gives me in the impression that you want to keep doing the esports thing but arent making enough money from it so are just applying to things with no clarity. that doesnt feel promising as an employer--it doesnt feel like you have a serious interest in the position im offering, so how do i know you won't quit immediately?
- rvi ⚡Jan 27, 2022i am sasuke· edited
ya
i cant tell if op is looking for feedback or not, but according to the first half of the cover letter, it feels like ops applying to marketing/branding/communicationbut then says he wants to work in
-architecture
-agriculture (seems broad???)
-aerospace engineeringif im nasa, why the f*** am i going to hire you based on your cover letter? all i can tell is that you like esports and can organize some sorta gaming event. that has f*** all to do with aerospace engineering
mba has nothing to do with aerospace engineering
it doesnt feel op is serious about it at all, so why include it or apply to anything aerospace engineering related????also just say founder of the startup.... ceo makes me wonder why your applying to jobs--is it that your startup isnt doing well? if it isn't, why not?
idk mannnnn i dont mean to be a debbie downer, op but
i dont feel like the experience you have merits 2 pages of resume... a lot of these are just 3 month engagements. especially with the magazine gig--again, how is that relevant to aerospace, agriculture, or architecture. i dont think it would be paid either since its the school magazine? essentially a school club? theres also a grammatical error in the last bullet point of the magazine editor section. if im any of the fields your into, knowing you were the 'on-site technical and managerial operative for centenary college athletics' tells me f*** all about how youre going to do at my joboverall, reading your resume gives me in the impression that you want to keep doing the esports thing but arent making enough money from it so are just applying to things with no clarity. that doesnt feel promising as an employer--it doesnt feel like you have a serious interest in the position im offering, so how do i know you won't quit immediately?
this is op's resume to become a farmer
- Jan 27, 2022i am sasuke· edited
ya
i cant tell if op is looking for feedback or not, but according to the first half of the cover letter, it feels like ops applying to marketing/branding/communicationbut then says he wants to work in
-architecture
-agriculture (seems broad???)
-aerospace engineeringif im nasa, why the f*** am i going to hire you based on your cover letter? all i can tell is that you like esports and can organize some sorta gaming event. that has f*** all to do with aerospace engineering
mba has nothing to do with aerospace engineering
it doesnt feel op is serious about it at all, so why include it or apply to anything aerospace engineering related????also just say founder of the startup.... ceo makes me wonder why your applying to jobs--is it that your startup isnt doing well? if it isn't, why not?
idk mannnnn i dont mean to be a debbie downer, op but
i dont feel like the experience you have merits 2 pages of resume... a lot of these are just 3 month engagements. especially with the magazine gig--again, how is that relevant to aerospace, agriculture, or architecture. i dont think it would be paid either since its the school magazine? essentially a school club? theres also a grammatical error in the last bullet point of the magazine editor section. if im any of the fields your into, knowing you were the 'on-site technical and managerial operative for centenary college athletics' tells me f*** all about how youre going to do at my joboverall, reading your resume gives me in the impression that you want to keep doing the esports thing but arent making enough money from it so are just applying to things with no clarity. that doesnt feel promising as an employer--it doesnt feel like you have a serious interest in the position im offering, so how do i know you won't quit immediately?
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Jan 27, 2022i am sasuke· editedya
i cant tell if op is looking for feedback or not, but according to the first half of the cover letter, it feels like ops applying to marketing/branding/communicationbut then says he wants to work in
-architecture
-agriculture (seems broad???)
-aerospace engineeringif im nasa, why the f*** am i going to hire you based on your cover letter? all i can tell is that you like esports and can organize some sorta gaming event. that has f*** all to do with aerospace engineering
mba has nothing to do with aerospace engineering
it doesnt feel op is serious about it at all, so why include it or apply to anything aerospace engineering related????also just say founder of the startup.... ceo makes me wonder why your applying to jobs--is it that your startup isnt doing well? if it isn't, why not?
idk mannnnn i dont mean to be a debbie downer, op but
i dont feel like the experience you have merits 2 pages of resume... a lot of these are just 3 month engagements. especially with the magazine gig--again, how is that relevant to aerospace, agriculture, or architecture. i dont think it would be paid either since its the school magazine? essentially a school club? theres also a grammatical error in the last bullet point of the magazine editor section. if im any of the fields your into, knowing you were the 'on-site technical and managerial operative for centenary college athletics' tells me f*** all about how youre going to do at my joboverall, reading your resume gives me in the impression that you want to keep doing the esports thing but arent making enough money from it so are just applying to things with no clarity. that doesnt feel promising as an employer--it doesnt feel like you have a serious interest in the position im offering, so how do i know you won't quit immediately?
- props for real feedback
@kennisgoodman read this
Jan 27, 2022
Mac Wit Da CheeseI was taught never to make a resume more than 1 page but could depend on what industry you’re going for
1 page for every 10 years worked
- Jan 27, 2022
i only say all that bc i dont want op to flopi think half that resume can be cut, and the cover letter really really should be tailored to the specific job ur applying to and reflect that u read the job description thoroughly--you want to bring out the parts of ur resume that reflect traits/skills theyre looking for. dont mention anything else in that cover letter skill/trait wise.
you should also be doing that in ur resume, but u dont need to be as specific/tailored to the specific position
OPJan 27, 2022rvi"attendees ranging from 30 to 105<"
105< doesnt make sense, idk what youre trying to say there. 105+?
Yes 105+ would be better, thanks!
- OPJan 27, 2022·1 replyVizeGuy
As a graphic designer the drop shadow on the body of text makes me angry idk why
I initially placed it for visibility against the background, but I too believe I may prefer the version without the shadow. I'll take a look at both versions again
- Jan 27, 2022
Too long
Jan 27, 2022·1 replyOP really said take a look y’all
niggas be too comfy sharing personal s*** online- OPJan 27, 2022hot pancakes
yeah the resume is wayyyyy too packed imo
also skills and interests seem all over the place, i suggest tailoring your resume to each position you are applying for, even if that means having different versions of your resume
Thanks for this feedback
Jan 27, 2022Wtf man take this down 😂 way too personal to share on here
- Jan 27, 2022·1 reply
not even elon musk has a resume that detailed
- Jan 27, 2022·1 reply
also whats with the background? you applying to be an AAN?
- OPJan 27, 2022·1 replyi am sasuke
ya
i cant tell if op is looking for feedback or not, but according to the first half of the cover letter, it feels like ops applying to marketing/branding/communicationbut then says he wants to work in
-architecture
-agriculture (seems broad???)
-aerospace engineeringif im nasa, why the f*** am i going to hire you based on your cover letter? all i can tell is that you like esports and can organize some sorta gaming event. that has f*** all to do with aerospace engineering
mba has nothing to do with aerospace engineering
it doesnt feel op is serious about it at all, so why include it or apply to anything aerospace engineering related????also just say founder of the startup.... ceo makes me wonder why your applying to jobs--is it that your startup isnt doing well? if it isn't, why not?
idk mannnnn i dont mean to be a debbie downer, op but
i dont feel like the experience you have merits 2 pages of resume... a lot of these are just 3 month engagements. especially with the magazine gig--again, how is that relevant to aerospace, agriculture, or architecture. i dont think it would be paid either since its the school magazine? essentially a school club? theres also a grammatical error in the last bullet point of the magazine editor section. if im any of the fields your into, knowing you were the 'on-site technical and managerial operative for centenary college athletics' tells me f*** all about how youre going to do at my joboverall, reading your resume gives me in the impression that you want to keep doing the esports thing but arent making enough money from it so are just applying to things with no clarity. that doesnt feel promising as an employer--it doesnt feel like you have a serious interest in the position im offering, so how do i know you won't quit immediately?
I've applied a lot of skills through different experience, so I intended to say what I've been doing over these last few years and how these experiences apply to my current skills, and also what I'm interested in in the future. Ultimately, I can perform many jobs, particularly the one I'm applying to
The titles of positions I applied to with this resume includes Head of Content, Head of Operations, Content Specialist, Consumer Games Account Manager, etc
- OPJan 27, 2022Kako
not even elon musk has a resume that detailed
Consensus says to minimize it so reduce it to a page. That might be refreshing altogether
- OPJan 27, 2022·1 replyKako
also whats with the background? you applying to be an AAN?
Idk what AAN is but my strategy is for my cover letter to get my resume to be noticed and memorable against the other (digital) pieces of paper they'll be sorting out
- Jan 27, 2022·1 reply
dont forget your to include your experience with NFT and blockchain operations via the kennis six
- OPJan 27, 2022_001
dont forget your to include your experience with NFT and blockchain operations via the kennis six
Thank you for this
This is a great step towards shortening my resume
Jan 27, 2022Try to make your resume get straight to the point OP, My Resume is less than 200 words and one page but I get hits because it's short and direct.