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  • Jan 27, 2022
    AR15

    Bro dont start it with Hi

    It stands out amongst the rest

  • Jan 27, 2022
    Fargo

    Try again twin

    why are u such a hater then

  • rvi
    Jan 27, 2022
    Tito Ninety Four

    Idk what AAN is but my strategy is for my cover letter to get my resume to be noticed and memorable against the other (digital) pieces of paper they'll be sorting out

    i dont think the background/text shadow effect makes it stand out in a positive way and it might just be distracting. standing out visually might not be a good thing, there is a danger of looking unprofessional rather than creative

    also i dont think its necessary to include the sentence about liking anime and video games, they already know you like video games and competitive events from the other part of the resume and they just dont give a s*** about the anime part

  • Niggamortis 👨‍🚀
    Jan 27, 2022

    I respect the thought behind it but fam this looks like a high school PowerPoint slide

  • Jan 27, 2022
    Tito Ninety Four

    I've applied a lot of skills through different experience, so I intended to say what I've been doing over these last few years and how these experiences apply to my current skills, and also what I'm interested in in the future. Ultimately, I can perform many jobs, particularly the one I'm applying to

    The titles of positions I applied to with this resume includes Head of Content, Head of Operations, Content Specialist, Consumer Games Account Manager, etc

    ya that makes sense

    id cut out all the stuff that's just your interest in the future tho, sincerely. you should instead focus on what you want that company/position to help you with in the future. for instance, in this role, i hope to deepen my knowledge of branding strategies yadda yadda yadda or something. something that shows you're really interested in the job itself, so employers feel reassured you really want to do their job and their job specifically

    if your interest is in content and whatnot,
    id definitely cut 2 of the 5 bullets you've dedicated to the postmaster role.

    im not sure you need any of the bulletpoints describing what the various companies/orgs do, mainly just what YOU did and what skills you learned. and if two bullet points illustrate you having the same skill, probably cut one. if the skill is in no way relevant to the position, probably cut it--for dreamhack for instance, cut the reviewed resumes part as it doesn't tell me how well you'll do as a content specialist. for content a***yst, it would be the excel spreadsheet bit--that feels like it would have to be a given, and sounds way less cool than the actual a***ysis you were doing lol

    additionally, the profile bullet points should really be encapsulated inside of the work experience. like the innovative thinker point can just be under the postmaster section and replace bullet points 1, 3, 4, or 5 as i feel like those honestly dont tell me that much lolo.

    and then by removing some of the extraneous bullet points so that each sect only has 3 (or 4 if u rly feel this is a super important experience), you will allow ppl to get that info easier from work experience, rather than having to have an extra section to reiterate points, essentially. this will also siginficantly cut the length of your resume i feel.

    i also think you might as well cut the magazine one--again, it sounds like its just a student club type thing? and 6 years out, you really dont need a student club on ur resume anymore, especially since its not really directly related to the roles ur seeking it seems... plus u already have a lot on your resume, so its really unecessary

  • Jan 27, 2022

    dog why u keep putting that willow smith pic on everything

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    You deserve a 100k job

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    Tito Ninety Four

    I initially placed it for visibility against the background, but I too believe I may prefer the version without the shadow. I'll take a look at both versions again

    Yeah I'm just messing, I definitely see why you put it but it just makes it look messier lol. I would definitely change it though or change the color of the background, maybe decrease the opacity more so it doesn't take away focus from the text too much. Sorry if I came across ignorant lol, it's only because it has potential with some changes.

  • lil ufo 🛸
    Jan 27, 2022

    yeah I think you should drop the shadow of the text

  • Jan 27, 2022

    Cover letters in 2022?

  • Jan 27, 2022

    Bobby Blue?

  • Jan 27, 2022

    If I see a resume as packed as that I'm completely ignoring right away lmao

  • Tadow 🥀
    Jan 27, 2022

    Mans is a designer and hit me with a wall of text

    Create an attractive web portfolio. Makes more sense given what your background is.

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    Just being honest, so don’t take offense when I say this, one of the worst cover letters I’ve seen in my life

    Resume should be 1 page, make different versions for diff role to reduce all the garbage you got on it

  • Jan 27, 2022

    good first attempt, keep at it

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    I'm re-designing the resume now. Excited for the product but not excited to be designing this resume once again, haha.

  • Tadow 🥀
    Jan 27, 2022
    bejewelry

    Just being honest, so don’t take offense when I say this, one of the worst cover letters I’ve seen in my life

    Resume should be 1 page, make different versions for diff role to reduce all the garbage you got on it

    This

    You don't need to include every single thing you've done on a resume. For whatever position you're applying for, only keep the s*** that is related to it.

  • lil ufo 🛸
    Jan 27, 2022
    Tito Ninety Four

    I'm re-designing the resume now. Excited for the product but not excited to be designing this resume once again, haha.

    use a template, download a psd or something like that then modify at your own taste

    the resume looks like a form for tax payment or something like that

  • Jan 27, 2022

    kill the drop shadow. put it in helvetica

  • Jan 27, 2022
    TorturedEchi

    OP really said take a look y’all niggas be too comfy sharing personal s*** online

    f*** someone gonna do to him lol? your phone and address is literally public record lol

  • Jan 27, 2022
    VizeGuy

    Are you applying to KTT

    Sorry OP, i already got the job

  • Jan 27, 2022

    SHOUT OUT TO SHREVEPORT

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    Please let me use you as a reference

  • Jan 28, 2022
    doctor

    You deserve a 100k job