TooBrokeToCare

5y

If I really f*** with it, I'll like repost it on SC or something haha, for free. I'm not tryna make a dime off anything and I'm advertising no services at all, I just think it's cool to show love to budding artists. Let's see what you got :)

Creasy

5y

yer

TooBrokeToCare

5y

5/10. Beat is solid, flow is in the pocket, but the lyrics, honestly, are kinda corny. Lyrically, it feels like you don't what you're tryna be. The bars are abstract but not witty enough to justify their abstractness. I don't get much from it lyrically either, like, I don't know what this is trying to evoke.

5/10 shows promise though. It means it's an average song. A 10 would be a defining piece of music, a 9 is a defining piece of a genre, an 8 is a top-shelf body of work, a 7 is a good song, a 6 is a decent song. This was an average song imo, but there's no reason to be discouraged by that. It's a solid starting point. Keep it up!

TooBrokeToCare

5y

If I really f*** with it, I'll like repost it on SC or something haha, for free. I'm not tryna make a dime off anything and I'm advertising no services at all, I just think it's cool to show love to budding artists. Let's see what you got :)

westtoronto125

5y

https://voca.ro/kasOiAnCe1M
working on a melody/flow for a song. Just sang this out off the top.

TooBrokeToCare

5y

5/10. The blueprint of a dope vaporwave song is there, but the drum loop stutters at times and messes up the rhythm drastically. it's also a bit too static to justify its runtime, imo, the song becomes redundant after a while. there is a way to make repetitiveness hypnotic and s***, but this just isn't really that, and i think a lot of that has to do with the loop in the background.

good starting point tho, keep it up :)

TooBrokeToCare

5y

If I really f*** with it, I'll like repost it on SC or something haha, for free. I'm not tryna make a dime off anything and I'm advertising no services at all, I just think it's cool to show love to budding artists. Let's see what you got :)

LordPrettyFlackoJR

5y

can i send a playlist with demos

TooBrokeToCare

5y

are they finished song? if not, i really don't wanna hear it haha, no offense

LordPrettyFlackoJR

5y

mmm some of them just need mastering/mixing, but yeah i understand most ppl been loving the demos but actually hearing it sequenced like a project is diff obv

ill just wait then

TooBrokeToCare

5y

if you send me one streamable song i'll peep it :)

LordPrettyFlackoJR

5y

this streamable imo

TooBrokeToCare

5y

it's not loading

LordPrettyFlackoJR

5y

was still on pvt soz lmao

TooBrokeToCare

5y

So, I'm rating this as a demo, not a song. As a demo, 7/10. It's really raw, and I like raw sounding music but it's a little too raw, but it's a demo so that's why. But beyond that, s*** is hard as f***. The singing at the end is a little weird, but besides that, I enjoyed this. Send me the project when it's done, I'd love to hear it :)

LordPrettyFlackoJR

5y

ayeee thanks alot famalam
too raw in the sense of the mixing i reckon,cause ircc does misses certain spots with vocals and fx
cause im with u, i love that more "punk"-ish vibe in music, raw energy

when u refer to the singing near the end, u mean that little interlude between the verses? ("now ive been going way too hard now..) cause i agree, actually been thinking about a way to give it a lil more character i guess is the word?

and for sure man will do! this actually gon be one of the singles dropping in a few weeks time :)

wingy

5y

Dope! Thanks for doing this.

https://soundcloud.com/glydecartel/sets/boom

TooBrokeToCare

5y

7/10. I really liked the first joint a lot, s*** was hard as hell. The third song was my least favorite, it was just sorta middle of the road for me. the last track had a really cool beat but some of the bars were a little too goofy for me, flows were great though. track 2 was tight.

i really liked the eclectic arrangement of artists on here too, lotta different styles, very uncommon nowadays. good stuff my dude, hope to hear more from you in the future :)