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  • If I really f*** with it, I'll like repost it on SC or something haha, for free. I'm not tryna make a dime off anything and I'm advertising no services at all, I just think it's cool to show love to budding artists. Let's see what you got :)

  • TooBrokeToCare

    If I really f*** with it, I'll like repost it on SC or something haha, for free. I'm not tryna make a dime off anything and I'm advertising no services at all, I just think it's cool to show love to budding artists. Let's see what you got :)

    yer

  • Creasy
    https://soundcloud.com/ace-el-rahim/first-drop-prod-by-ffjodor-lopes

    yer

    5/10. Beat is solid, flow is in the pocket, but the lyrics, honestly, are kinda corny. Lyrically, it feels like you don't what you're tryna be. The bars are abstract but not witty enough to justify their abstractness. I don't get much from it lyrically either, like, I don't know what this is trying to evoke.

    5/10 shows promise though. It means it's an average song. A 10 would be a defining piece of music, a 9 is a defining piece of a genre, an 8 is a top-shelf body of work, a 7 is a good song, a 6 is a decent song. This was an average song imo, but there's no reason to be discouraged by that. It's a solid starting point. Keep it up!

  • TooBrokeToCare

    5/10. Beat is solid, flow is in the pocket, but the lyrics, honestly, are kinda corny. Lyrically, it feels like you don't what you're tryna be. The bars are abstract but not witty enough to justify their abstractness. I don't get much from it lyrically either, like, I don't know what this is trying to evoke.

    5/10 shows promise though. It means it's an average song. A 10 would be a defining piece of music, a 9 is a defining piece of a genre, an 8 is a top-shelf body of work, a 7 is a good song, a 6 is a decent song. This was an average song imo, but there's no reason to be discouraged by that. It's a solid starting point. Keep it up!

    lmao bet

    Thanks for listening !!

  • TooBrokeToCare

    If I really f*** with it, I'll like repost it on SC or something haha, for free. I'm not tryna make a dime off anything and I'm advertising no services at all, I just think it's cool to show love to budding artists. Let's see what you got :)

    https://voca.ro/kasOiAnCe1M
    working on a melody/flow for a song. Just sang this out off the top.

  • westtoronto125

    https://voca.ro/kasOiAnCe1M
    working on a melody/flow for a song. Just sang this out off the top.

    come on fam whole songs bro i'm not rick rubin out here tryna yeezus your s*** up

  • Animal Pharm
    https://soundcloud.com/smellypits/coolitnow

    5/10. The blueprint of a dope vaporwave song is there, but the drum loop stutters at times and messes up the rhythm drastically. it's also a bit too static to justify its runtime, imo, the song becomes redundant after a while. there is a way to make repetitiveness hypnotic and s***, but this just isn't really that, and i think a lot of that has to do with the loop in the background.

    good starting point tho, keep it up :)

  • TooBrokeToCare

    5/10. The blueprint of a dope vaporwave song is there, but the drum loop stutters at times and messes up the rhythm drastically. it's also a bit too static to justify its runtime, imo, the song becomes redundant after a while. there is a way to make repetitiveness hypnotic and s***, but this just isn't really that, and i think a lot of that has to do with the loop in the background.

    good starting point tho, keep it up :)

    Thanks Dude ..

  • Just Rate them All ..

  • TooBrokeToCare

    If I really f*** with it, I'll like repost it on SC or something haha, for free. I'm not tryna make a dime off anything and I'm advertising no services at all, I just think it's cool to show love to budding artists. Let's see what you got :)

    can i send a playlist with demos

  • LordPrettyFlackoJR

    can i send a playlist with demos

    are they finished song? if not, i really don't wanna hear it haha, no offense

  • TooBrokeToCare

    are they finished song? if not, i really don't wanna hear it haha, no offense

    mmm some of them just need mastering/mixing, but yeah i understand most ppl been loving the demos but actually hearing it sequenced like a project is diff obv

    ill just wait then

  • LordPrettyFlackoJR

    mmm some of them just need mastering/mixing, but yeah i understand most ppl been loving the demos but actually hearing it sequenced like a project is diff obv

    ill just wait then

    if you send me one streamable song i'll peep it :)

  • TooBrokeToCare

    if you send me one streamable song i'll peep it :)

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    this streamable imo

  • LordPrettyFlackoJR
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kMLaqnst-xs

    this streamable imo

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  • TooBrokeToCare

    it's not loading

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    was still on pvt soz lmao

  • LordPrettyFlackoJR
    https://youtu.be/kMLaqnst-xs

    was still on pvt soz lmao

    So, I'm rating this as a demo, not a song. As a demo, 7/10. It's really raw, and I like raw sounding music but it's a little too raw, but it's a demo so that's why. But beyond that, s*** is hard as f***. The singing at the end is a little weird, but besides that, I enjoyed this. Send me the project when it's done, I'd love to hear it :)

  • TooBrokeToCare

    So, I'm rating this as a demo, not a song. As a demo, 7/10. It's really raw, and I like raw sounding music but it's a little too raw, but it's a demo so that's why. But beyond that, s*** is hard as f***. The singing at the end is a little weird, but besides that, I enjoyed this. Send me the project when it's done, I'd love to hear it :)

    ayeee thanks alot famalam
    too raw in the sense of the mixing i reckon,cause ircc does misses certain spots with vocals and fx
    cause im with u, i love that more "punk"-ish vibe in music, raw energy

    when u refer to the singing near the end, u mean that little interlude between the verses? ("now ive been going way too hard now..) cause i agree, actually been thinking about a way to give it a lil more character i guess is the word?

    and for sure man will do! this actually gon be one of the singles dropping in a few weeks time :)

  • LordPrettyFlackoJR

    ayeee thanks alot famalam
    too raw in the sense of the mixing i reckon,cause ircc does misses certain spots with vocals and fx
    cause im with u, i love that more "punk"-ish vibe in music, raw energy

    when u refer to the singing near the end, u mean that little interlude between the verses? ("now ive been going way too hard now..) cause i agree, actually been thinking about a way to give it a lil more character i guess is the word?

    and for sure man will do! this actually gon be one of the singles dropping in a few weeks time :)

    yeah that's the spot i meant

  • ohmygoshdarnit

    Dope! Thanks for doing this.

    https://soundcloud.com/glydecartel/sets/boom

    7/10. I really liked the first joint a lot, s*** was hard as hell. The third song was my least favorite, it was just sorta middle of the road for me. the last track had a really cool beat but some of the bars were a little too goofy for me, flows were great though. track 2 was tight.

    i really liked the eclectic arrangement of artists on here too, lotta different styles, very uncommon nowadays. good stuff my dude, hope to hear more from you in the future :)

  • TooBrokeToCare

    7/10. I really liked the first joint a lot, s*** was hard as hell. The third song was my least favorite, it was just sorta middle of the road for me. the last track had a really cool beat but some of the bars were a little too goofy for me, flows were great though. track 2 was tight.

    i really liked the eclectic arrangement of artists on here too, lotta different styles, very uncommon nowadays. good stuff my dude, hope to hear more from you in the future :)

    Ayy, appreciate the honest feedback.
    Glad you liked the first song (BOOM)
    We actually did a video to it, as well.

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