yo, nerdy fact here, but part of your video was shot where travis scott shot the music video for "that b**** crazy" back in 2011. i recognized it instantly. you guys are either from texas or california i assume? vid is tight

Do you got a link? I can't seem to find it.

youtube.com/watch?v=TlhNiMw6sV0

around 2:55

youtube.com/watch?v=nWBAQWAdUeM

youtube.com/watch?v=fxc2dwSvXEg

pick which one youll listen to

@TooBrokeToCare

--Impossible--

check out this^^

--A Dame To Kill For--

or this^^

its really f***ing tight that you're doing this. if you're still giving some projects a listen, check out this playlist of my songs.

its not an album or a mixtape, just a conglomeration of fav songs of mine, so there's not a set vibe or atmosphere to it. hope you f*** w it bro

clyp.it/iqomdzcz

here

gonna peep this and everyone's s*** tomorrow morning :)

montepaima.bandcamp.com
thanks for checking it out

what about my song i posted 2 days ago?

And what it's really going for is a very raw view on a very raw talent. Transparency of Growth. But also somewhat of a starting point to a whole concept. Like water is for the roots.

Ace el Rahim - Like Water is 4 the Roots

hey guys, i'm gonna listen to this all right now!

But

Backstroke, backstroke I be swimming in that
Tap out, tap out before I slip up in here
Pink Dolphin garments I'm fitted for rap
Flood through her garden won't get my kids back

is also my favorite 4-bar sequence of mine I have to admit, so I'm mad biased lol

I watched the first one. 7/10. I like the ideas on here a lot, I just wish the songs landed more of a punch. The remixes are cool as f***, esp the Danny Brown remix. But I just feel like the songs lack a certain kind of momentum to drive the project fully. Good stuff though!

6/10 for the first one, 5/10 for the second one. they don't have much identity or gravitas, but they're both structurally sound projects. i'd like to see a bit more individuality. but it's a solid start!

I love the first one, super super experimental with an incredible amount of potential, seriously fam. Don't you ever let go of art, please. Keep that up

YO MY BAD, REREVIEW. your second song started playing in a different tab and it sounded like two different tracks. but it was my computer being weird lmao.

8/10. your first song is excellent. a tighter mix and a slightly snappier song structure would benefit it greatly. but it was awesome man, you got some serious talent. gonna listen to the whole compilation today!

bro it was a 1 minute snippet that cut off in the middle of a word at the end lol

3/10. Sorry man, I don't wanna be a d***, but this was all over the place. the mix is really messy, the songs are overproduced, and lots of it is kinda outta tune. the song structures are absolutely shapeless too. but you do have an original style fundamentally, so keep at it. plus, i'm just a random guy on the internet, so who gives a f*** ab my opinion. do your thing dude!

4/10. it's way too overproduced, but the ambition doesn't go unnoticed. the song sounds like an ambient track with may too much going on, and never really takes form. the ornamental aspects of the music, like the vocal processing, atmosphere, song structure, etc, are interesting. but the full package is messy and sounds unfinished imo.

appreciate it fam!!! I'll work harder

no doubt. and again, i'm a random guy online, my word isn't bond. if you like it, you like it.

I dont make music for certain groups of people or just critics

all constructive criticism is appreciated

@TooBrokeToCare

Peep this project if you get the chance bro

Dropped it last summer, new EP otw btw

Also on Spotify and Apple Music