PAPI NIGGA DAVE

2y

Your voice nice @op

get up with me

2y

full circle is 10 letters

very dope my brudda, u got that d’angelo s*** down i’m jealous ngl lol

BRAVE

2y

Full circle is 10 letters exactly, and that line is 10 syllables

get up with me

2y

ayo

BRAVE

2y

You want a full breakdown?

BRAVE

2y

The freestyle is a countdown from the number 10. We see each line directly mention the numbers in some way:

Pay at ten tion to the next bars I spit
It’s like ninth inning home runs I hit
Cause I strike like eight balls I win
Seven days I’m always lit
Start one drink that turns to six
5 don’t get s***

But there’s a more subtle countdown as well - in the syllables:

Pay attention to the next bars I spit - 10 syllables
It’s like ninth inning home runs I hit - 9 syllables
Cause I strike like eight balls I win - 8 syllables
When I count down don’t forget - 7 syllables

Then we start a series of 7 syllable lines:
”Seven days I’m always lit
Give it time you’ll love this s***
When I drop rhymes that s*** clicks
Start one drink that turns to six”

That last line unsurprisingly brings us to the six syllable scheme:
”I go off on dumb s***
The girls go up to this
The clock is at half time
But 12 ain’t donnin s***”

“The clock is at half time is a reference to the number 6 itself, which is half of the number 12, hence “the clock is at half time”…it is also the 12th line in the freestyle. 12 also references the police, which echoes throughout the next two lines:
”Police don’t run s***
5 don’t get s***”

Here we counted down from five to four syllables, the latter line of which references the former’s five syllables (and 5 as in “5-0” for the police of course). Then count down to 3-2 syllables:
”I’m the s***
Ya dig”

We start a number two based line:
”Double trouble double cupping two twins popping bottles bubble asses the blunt is passing”

In this climactic line we start to wrap things up and bring them full circle back to the number 10. Double (2) trouble double (2) cupping two (2) twins (2) popping bottles bubble asses (2)
2 2 2 2 2 = 10

The final two lines count down from 9-10 syllables:
”I just shoot the s*** like 23
Full circle now b****es checking for me”

“Full circle” is ten letters. And “I just shoot the s*** like 23” isn’t just wordplay referencing Michael Jordan, it’s directly referencing the number of syllables in the previous line. Then finally, we wrap the countdown up with a single word:

One

BRAVE

2y

@saveme and everyone else who wants the breakdown

BRAVE

2y

The freestyle is a countdown from the number 10. We see each line directly mention the numbers in some way:

Pay at ten tion to the next bars I spit
It’s like ninth inning home runs I hit
Cause I strike like eight balls I win
Seven days I’m always lit
Start one drink that turns to six
5 don’t get s***

But there’s a more subtle countdown as well - in the syllables:

Pay attention to the next bars I spit - 10 syllables
It’s like ninth inning home runs I hit - 9 syllables
Cause I strike like eight balls I win - 8 syllables
When I count down don’t forget - 7 syllables

Then we start a series of 7 syllable lines:
”Seven days I’m always lit
Give it time you’ll love this s***
When I drop rhymes that s*** clicks
Start one drink that turns to six”

That last line unsurprisingly brings us to the six syllable scheme:
”I go off on dumb s***
The girls go up to this
The clock is at half time
But 12 ain’t donnin s***”

“The clock is at half time is a reference to the number 6 itself, which is half of the number 12, hence “the clock is at half time”…it is also the 12th line in the freestyle. 12 also references the police, which echoes throughout the next two lines:
”Police don’t run s***
5 don’t get s***”

Here we counted down from five to four syllables, the latter line of which references the former’s five syllables (and 5 as in “5-0” for the police of course). Then count down to 3-2 syllables:
”I’m the s***
Ya dig”

We start a number two based line:
”Double trouble double cupping two twins popping bottles bubble asses the blunt is passing”

In this climactic line we start to wrap things up and bring them full circle back to the number 10. Double (2) trouble double (2) cupping two (2) twins (2) popping bottles bubble asses (2)
2 2 2 2 2 = 10

The final two lines count down from 9-10 syllables:
”I just shoot the s*** like 23
Full circle now b****es checking for me”

“Full circle” is ten letters. And “I just shoot the s*** like 23” isn’t just wordplay referencing Michael Jordan, it’s directly referencing the number of syllables in the previous line. Then finally, we wrap the countdown up with a single word:

One

get up with me

2y

i genuinely have no clue how you came up with this.. 1 of the most creative lil breakdowns i have seen. this some lupe fiasco type s***

nothing better when an artist truly cares about their craft, how long did this even take u 2 come up with @Brave ?

RICKY 2320

2y

don’t break down your own bars bro

Deletedd

2y

@op insane bro

BRAVE

2y

❤️

BRAVE

2y

The freestyle is a countdown from the number 10. We see each line directly mention the numbers in some way:

Pay at ten tion to the next bars I spit
It’s like ninth inning home runs I hit
Cause I strike like eight balls I win
Seven days I’m always lit
Start one drink that turns to six
5 don’t get s***

But there’s a more subtle countdown as well - in the syllables:

Pay attention to the next bars I spit - 10 syllables
It’s like ninth inning home runs I hit - 9 syllables
Cause I strike like eight balls I win - 8 syllables
When I count down don’t forget - 7 syllables

Then we start a series of 7 syllable lines:
”Seven days I’m always lit
Give it time you’ll love this s***
When I drop rhymes that s*** clicks
Start one drink that turns to six”

That last line unsurprisingly brings us to the six syllable scheme:
”I go off on dumb s***
The girls go up to this
The clock is at half time
But 12 ain’t donnin s***”

“The clock is at half time is a reference to the number 6 itself, which is half of the number 12, hence “the clock is at half time”…it is also the 12th line in the freestyle. 12 also references the police, which echoes throughout the next two lines:
”Police don’t run s***
5 don’t get s***”

Here we counted down from five to four syllables, the latter line of which references the former’s five syllables (and 5 as in “5-0” for the police of course). Then count down to 3-2 syllables:
”I’m the s***
Ya dig”

We start a number two based line:
”Double trouble double cupping two twins popping bottles bubble asses the blunt is passing”

In this climactic line we start to wrap things up and bring them full circle back to the number 10. Double (2) trouble double (2) cupping two (2) twins (2) popping bottles bubble asses (2)
2 2 2 2 2 = 10

The final two lines count down from 9-10 syllables:
”I just shoot the s*** like 23
Full circle now b****es checking for me”

“Full circle” is ten letters. And “I just shoot the s*** like 23” isn’t just wordplay referencing Michael Jordan, it’s directly referencing the number of syllables in the previous line. Then finally, we wrap the countdown up with a single word:

One

BRAVE

2y

About 20 mins and that’s because of figuring out the actual s*** I wanted to say. The numbers scheme idea was the initial idea that was actually the easy part

saint dot edumist

2y

yeah man like i said, you are a natural

s*** gotta b your dharma