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  • Updated Jun 17

    The

    Space

    Between

    馃懡

    Feel free to get creative with meter, presentation, subject matter. Anything goes, it鈥檚 your interpretation!

    If @PilotJones wishes to return, we will welcome him back, and resume with his poetry club thread.
    Life goes on. 鉁嶏笍

  • May 27
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                  Thigh Gaps

    I鈥檓 addicted to thigh gaps
    The right lighting on the right pic of the right ass
    To light taps of my foot, scrolling between nine apps
    To the hopeless dissonance of the exact line that you lie at
    To the smug superiority of judging you for what you cry about
    To the tiptoeing, on birthdays, when you鈥檙e closer to dying out
    To rhyme schemes that make perfect sense of our time now
    To knowing exactly what you c***for
    To coming just in time for a crumb, or
    Some sliver of something human, but feeling dumb for
    Vicariously living through you
    I鈥檓 addicted to these computers
    To your suitors, and why I鈥檓 not one
    To my admirers, even when I don鈥檛 got one
    To your response to my comment
    To how we all feel closer to one another when we vomit
    To how illogical it is to be totally honest
    To every emotion that you fake
    To introspection for introspection鈥檚 sake
    To my reflection when I pass every lake
    I smooth my hair and think about what it must take
    To get between your thighs

  • i've seen my source of grief;
    i can only watch from afar.
    it'd be too much to bear, simple greetings,

    more so in the presence of him,
    for he reaps a harvest in you
    that for me yielded only blight.

    if not for my duty, i'd up and leave,
    but i remain captive, melting
    away, waiting for rain

  • May 31

    bump

  • Jun 3
    1 reply
    Jonboi
                  Thigh Gaps

    I鈥檓 addicted to thigh gaps
    The right lighting on the right pic of the right ass
    To light taps of my foot, scrolling between nine apps
    To the hopeless dissonance of the exact line that you lie at
    To the smug superiority of judging you for what you cry about
    To the tiptoeing, on birthdays, when you鈥檙e closer to dying out
    To rhyme schemes that make perfect sense of our time now
    To knowing exactly what you c***for
    To coming just in time for a crumb, or
    Some sliver of something human, but feeling dumb for
    Vicariously living through you
    I鈥檓 addicted to these computers
    To your suitors, and why I鈥檓 not one
    To my admirers, even when I don鈥檛 got one
    To your response to my comment
    To how we all feel closer to one another when we vomit
    To how illogical it is to be totally honest
    To every emotion that you fake
    To introspection for introspection鈥檚 sake
    To my reflection when I pass every lake
    I smooth my hair and think about what it must take
    To get between your thighs

    bruh this belongs in g&g

  • Jun 3
    Iluvmusic123

    bruh this belongs in g&g

    I dunno, it鈥檚 sorta toxic tbh

  • Jun 3
    1 reply

    new thread vss365today.com going to start doing these again.

  • Jun 3
    1 reply

    everything and the space between the alternating breath
    the silence between the clock ticking, all reason after death
    moving feet, the heartbeat the moment that we met
    everything and the space between my love for you will set

  • Jun 4
    PADYBU

    everything and the space between the alternating breath
    the silence between the clock ticking, all reason after death
    moving feet, the heartbeat the moment that we met
    everything and the space between my love for you will set

    I love short and poignant poems like this

  • Jun 4
    1 reply
    best poster

    new thread https://vss365today.com/ going to start doing these again.

    This your site?

  • Jonboi

    This your site?

    nope, vss is just a very short story. often people use the daily prompt to write a prose piece. good for practice for sure with the constraint.

  • Jun 5
    1 reply
    Jonboi
                  Thigh Gaps

    I鈥檓 addicted to thigh gaps
    The right lighting on the right pic of the right ass
    To light taps of my foot, scrolling between nine apps
    To the hopeless dissonance of the exact line that you lie at
    To the smug superiority of judging you for what you cry about
    To the tiptoeing, on birthdays, when you鈥檙e closer to dying out
    To rhyme schemes that make perfect sense of our time now
    To knowing exactly what you c***for
    To coming just in time for a crumb, or
    Some sliver of something human, but feeling dumb for
    Vicariously living through you
    I鈥檓 addicted to these computers
    To your suitors, and why I鈥檓 not one
    To my admirers, even when I don鈥檛 got one
    To your response to my comment
    To how we all feel closer to one another when we vomit
    To how illogical it is to be totally honest
    To every emotion that you fake
    To introspection for introspection鈥檚 sake
    To my reflection when I pass every lake
    I smooth my hair and think about what it must take
    To get between your thighs

    some of da realest s*** i've ever read

  • Nuja 馃拪
    Jun 5

    Drowning

    Lead me into this ocean
    Lead me in hopes that I walk on water
    Maybe then I can truly believe in miracles
    Maybe this water will turn into wine
    So I can be drunk off something else
    That isn鈥檛 my own foolishness

    I never learned how to swim
    But I still want you to lead me
    Lead me into the deep end
    I have no clue how to bring myself back
    So I鈥檒l have to count on someone else
    To save me from death
    But nobody will ever come
    My lungs gasping for air
    But this feeling isn鈥檛 new
    I suffocate on the surface all the same
    But at least in here there is ambiance
    It will all be over soon.

  • Jun 5
    pegasus7

    some of da realest s*** i've ever read

    Thank you. I鈥檓 really glad u find it relatable. 馃檹

  • Jun 10
    1 reply

    Directionless

    They said that the road was paved in gold, well fools believe in tales tall plus old
    The present is a present, they say, lies devised to hide in sane sight
    The future is for us, we say, towards we walk, we might
    Direction provided, Gods glory, the only right

  • Jun 17
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    Liberation could be a wind embraced child on a wooden seat yet in a blink that same body hanging from a branch dangling it鈥檚 feet
    Neglected perspective keep me estranged from inner peace pieces of a man departed and rearranged to a beast

  • Jun 17
    DonEmeritus

    Directionless

    They said that the road was paved in gold, well fools believe in tales tall plus old
    The present is a present, they say, lies devised to hide in sane sight
    The future is for us, we say, towards we walk, we might
    Direction provided, Gods glory, the only right

    They say 鈥渢he present is a present, kiss my ass鈥

    Didn鈥檛 expect it to get religious. That was a twist. People definitely find a sense of direction in God.

  • Jun 17
    1 reply
    Crack Palm Stepper

    Liberation could be a wind embraced child on a wooden seat yet in a blink that same body hanging from a branch dangling it鈥檚 feet
    Neglected perspective keep me estranged from inner peace pieces of a man departed and rearranged to a beast

    I like how you use juxtaposition here

    @MURKY has just switched the prompt to Liberation

    But really, you can do whatever you want, I don鈥檛 really care haha

  • Jun 17
    1 reply
    Jonboi

    I like how you use juxtaposition here

    @MURKY has just switched the prompt to Liberation

    But really, you can do whatever you want, I don鈥檛 really care haha

    Thanks man that means a lot I was afraid of posting this here because I feel like it was mediocre compared to what you guys posts. question is the juxtaposition only thing that would make this redeemable?

  • Jun 17
    Crack Palm Stepper

    Thanks man that means a lot I was afraid of posting this here because I feel like it was mediocre compared to what you guys posts. question is the juxtaposition only thing that would make this redeemable?

    I don鈥檛 really know what you鈥檙e trying to say. Maybe that innocence and cruelty both exist in this world. It鈥檚 a little vague. I don鈥檛 feel like I get a whole lot out of it.

    I will also say that I鈥檓 a hard person to please. I think this should be a safe space for anyone to post whatever tho. It doesn鈥檛 have to be as good as the next guys. Unfortunately this thread doesn鈥檛 get a lot of traffic鈥 Would you like to give your thoughts on your poem, or would you prefer not to explain it? :)